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| sculpture: Jason deCaires Taylor Her cries for help mere bubbles as dread of a drowning death surfaces petrification the anchor pulling her down down down until surrender sets her free a buoy. @laurie kolp |
Picture prompt inspiration: Magpie Tales
"To have great poets there must be great audiences too." ~Walt Whitman
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28 comments:
ah..yes indeed...
terrific
petrification...being stuck can certainly do that...of course there are many things that can lead there or metaphors you can pull from that but...yes
happy sunday L
The words fit this picture so powerfully..the shape of words like a diving bell..anchors and buoys are often confused perhaps..Jae
Powerful words. Excellently done.
wow..and surrender sets her free...sometimes this can be the right way..
Lovely, Laurie :)
wow. Heavy stuff.
another interesting take on this sculpture prompt - love the idea of both the anchor and the surrender ...
surrender from impending doom -I like it!!!
Wow, lots of metaphoric interpretation available in this poem, so very well written!
Powerful poem here.
Mentioned you in my blog today, Laurie. Thanks again for sending a link for the River challenge. I am enjoying this daily stone writing.:)
I am with Eva...this is some heavy stuff...love it Laurie!!!
A wonderful piece in word and presentation...this has so many interpretations for me...I love writing that tweaks my imagination.
Many angles to this one. Touches a fear we all have.
Great play of words Laurie! You employed figurative speech very well
Hank
Buoys are good! I am always enjoying
their lift! and the bell- thanks.
What a compelling contrast...nice...
Thanks, you gave me a small stone.
The itch pulls my brain
to dive deep no matter how
much the cost may be.
Oh buoy this is great!
Really creative!
Yes, like it!
So true. Surrender can be freeing.
=)
I love the multiple meaningful ways I get to interpret your poem. Thank you for sharing your poem and your style.
Gripping in thought and form.
Petrification the anchor is brilliant!
I love the contrast. Terrific.
Good. This really evokes sensation.
Well done Laurie - I was holding my breath reading this!
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