A trail of drugstore glasses
...in the kitchen
...in the den
...in the bedroom
like our clothes
last night.
Prompt inspiration:
Imaginary Garden Fireblossom Friday #10- Lights, Cameras, Love
ARCHIVES.....FIRST DRAFTS.....
21 comments:
Some images just say it all, Laurie. I think I've been in this movie. Not an unneeded word here--perfect.
Perfection! A love story laid bare (no pun intended, hee hee)
An excellent analogy.
What a nice way to leave a trail of clothes too :)
Very romantic. 'nuff said. ;)
I followed the trail all the way to a wide smile. What a blessing!
Happy smiles.
Oh Laurie, this is gorgeous- love the simile!
They still make it- that's great! :-)
hehe....sounds like it was a wonderful evening....smiles..
Nice stuff, Laurie. Can't let the fire go out. Thanks for being part of FBF!
Lovely. Who would have thought drugstore glasses could be sexy :)
Brief, direct, luscious, just like a trail of clothes should be. Great write.
Love the brevity, Laurie...makes the piece all the more distinct and impacting. :)
Love this!
Lovely words !!!
New wine in old glasses - fab drink. Thanks.
A heartfelt applause from me, Laurie. This says so much in five lines.
Oh, outstanding!
Love, Senior Style ~~~
oh, how delightful!!
... the way of passion! :)
Slam---out' the ballpark, girl!
You know how I love tiny poems that really hit hard. The trail of glasses makes it clear that this is a long-term, cohabitating relationship. And the fact that there is still a trail of clothing, after a number of years perhaps, is a very good sign that they have kept the passion alive. Bravo to them and to you. ;)
Love this Laurie....a perfect poetic description of love through the years. :-)
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