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| Summer Night, 1913, by Albert Bloch Picture prompt from The Mag 133 |
A blue moon,
hands in pants
absurdity, obscure
(per)chance when
ghostly demons come
to play swirly, curly
pleasure points, a milky
dream-like cherry stance.
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| Summer Night, 1913, by Albert Bloch Picture prompt from The Mag 133 |
31 comments:
Pretty poetry...loved cherry-stance..
There's seems to be some sexual innuendo in your poem... am I correct or do I just have a dirty mind?
your poem totally summed up the picture.....sensual...sexy...delicious..xx
Looks like a tempting dessert ~
I love it! Especially the ending:
"to play swirly, curly
pleasure points, a milky
dream-like cherry stance"
I went back to reread because the comments were talking about the sexuality. I totally misread "hands in pants" as "hands in paints." :) I was picturing myself painting on the kitchen floor. I love to paint with my hands. :)
haha...hand in pants....what is it getting all swirly and milky there? smiles....
Very sly but never dry.
Oh, this is sooooooo naughty! Too funny coming right behind the *S**T one... haha
Very clever!~! ;)
Fun read.... Cool!..
JJRod'z
tasty
Yummy! I had blue moon on my mind last night when I chose this...
Definitely a sexual bent here!
Devilishly sensual humor here :). Who'da thought? ;)
Love the swirly demons at play..quite a spell you weave!
You gave me a completely new POV on this image. Well done!
A delectable read :-)
I love all the colors and flavors of your poem, Laurie. So delicious, and I thank you for sharing! =D
This dessert is as delicious as they come!!!
Hands in the pants .... Cherry stance. Loved it. That blue moon is a wonder
very tasty Laurie.....thanks again for sharing your words
Oh so very cherry-like and dreamy, indeed!
So sensual yet enigmatic, much like the painting and very original as usual.
Delightful.
Your word choice, interesting. It describes the image seen, but with an evocative sensual twist mixed in. Very cleverly penned!
Wonderful to think of moon with hands in its pants. k .
...like singing Laurie, full of whimsy, mildly wicked -- loved this... :)
Of course !, chocolate bar as seen on a molecular level , it all makes sense now
A tasty sensual morsel love it
Delicious!
really enjoy your take on the prompt, Laurie! LOVE it!
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