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| artwork by Joseph Lorusso Pic prompt courtesy of The Mag155 |
Your kiss, a taste
of cool peppermint
as our tongues entwine.
Striped swirls, a body
wave from head to toe,
vibration strong enough
to rattle a coffee cup
to the table's edge,
its shatter a shiver
of minty ecstasy.
43 comments:
beautiful, just fantastic- your kiss a taste/ of cool peppermint... oh that is just such a great line, I love it.
Lovely ... a powerful romance !!!
Now that would be SOME kiss! Nice Mag, Laurie!
Like a giant peppermint stick .. delicious.
very sexy and tasty!
whew...is it hot in here...smiles...peppermint taste eh? smiles...careful you will knock the table over...smiles.
i like how you caught the coffee cup falling
Initiated Kiss
Great passion and romance.
love the thought of a kiss rattling a coffe cup...great imagry.
Oh fresh and minty Laurie! And a rattling coffee cup? They're definitely in the throes of passion.
Sounds good but the only thing I get excited about is chocolate.
Delicious write, I think I can taste it too! I like your header photo with the birds too!
Minty twining! could sell it as tea!
Nothing wrong with a delicious kiss!
Absolutely delicious....
Great kiss! Other things vibrate as much and shatter. Nicely Laurie!
Hank
Oooooo...yummy!
Hugs
SueAnn
Skillfully inventive and beautifully done...
Alas, these days peppermints don't have quite that oooomph for me!
The coffee cup grabbed my attention too - love how you included that detail in your poem.
cool and steamy all at once!
Wow. Shivery good!
Imagery to knock my socks off! It's a good match to the glowing art.
ack! that CUP!
Whew...hope that wasn't the good china...what the hell, who cares in a moment like that. Oooolala! Crazy good!
And that bus picture in the background of your site reminds me of Priscilla, Queen of the Desert....lol.
I really like your explanation for that coffee cup placement...
"to rattle a coffee cup
to the table's edge"
=)
Oh, yummo...could really taste that one..and in daylight too..fab!!
Hi Laura ~~
Intriguing suggestive verse
shivers quiver through my bod.
I need a cool tasting kiss
striped swirl make your debut.
Would love those mints on my tongue
try to shake tables tonight?
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This is a wow poem. I love the idea of passion shattering a cup!
Sensuous lines and photo. Wowser!
Sensuous lines and photo. Wowser!
tasty indeed...and ..thanks for this
Laurie, this is alive with sensuality. Nothing like rolling a mint from your mouth to that of your lover, either! Loved the cup rattling... you little minx! Peace, Amy
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I think it rattled more than the coffee cup.
This picture begs a sensory response, and you delivered.
Loved "whole body wave" and laughed out loud at Dave King's comment...have to agree. Loved your poem!
"minty ecstasy"....i like the sound of that.....wonderful write Laurie!!
You know, that I am almost there ready to catch that cup. Lovely tension and passion in this poem Laurie.
Delicious words.
Anna :o]
I was worried about that cup, too. Now, doubly so!
Love the peppermint and the coffee cup rattling.
Almost as though the entire earth began to tremble !
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