I was with you every mile or kilometre of the way! Had some of those drives through snow storms and fog -- equally scary with thoughts of oncoming vehicles and snow plows.Life has a lot of that fog too and wish you safe passageway through this year and months to come.
Powerful writing here, Laurie. Grey is symbolic of so much. And there really IS so much that is outside of our control!
What a somber drive... december blues are grey
Thinking of you as you continue on this current journey - prayers and hugs K
ugh...yeah...they make for a fine metaphor on the things we can not control...that we dont see coming until it is on us...been there...
I love how you build this nightmare. At least there is protection from death. Always guardians exist. You too are one.
that sounds like a scary drive. this is so descriptive it felt like the reader was there
This is grey, and dark on a few levels. And I can relate. Well done.
I'm with Brian - a better metaphor for life I cannot imagine.
Sometimes the outside world seems to conspire with our thoughts..hoping the grey keeps you safe..it can be a place to gather ones wits..
Yes so much is grayness as we move along in our life's journey. Thanks for taking there time to write this and post. Blessing to you and yours this holiday season.
Having driven in the fog recently, I agree that thick fog can emphasize our deepest fears.Hope you can enjoy the holiday with those who are dear to you, Laurie!
What an extraordinarily beautiful piece of writing. Even the grey barrier is contradictory both a danger yet an shield too from the outside world.
There are some things or may be many which we can't control. Your words made me think. The representation of grey and fog says a lot.-HA
So reminds me of growing old and no control. Great write. Lvoe it!
Two gray journeys going on here, neither under our control........may you travel safely through, towards spring, my friend, and still hear in April birdsong the voices of those you love.
these days its really hard to drive with fog all over.
ugh it's tough... and an excellent image and metaphor for life as well... i tend to be a control freak and have learned the hard way that the things i really can control are not much... hugs...
What do we control? Perhaps it is better to let go and trust. I love this and the way you capture hope.
Driving in fog can be scary. So can living in a fog.
I have found since i have gotten a bit older i am content to let the others pass.
what a thought provoking piece with so many shades..this grey is magical....
'Combative as I am at times,I yield. I let other carspass me.' ~ this one sounds positive for me - you're in safe mode :)
Yield ... yes, surrender. God knows best and will steer us in the right direction. Enjoyed your fog & traffic metaphor for life's journey. Happy Holidays, Laurie :)
A metaphor of our life's journey... Well done!
Life certainly can feel like this. You really built up the emotions with your words.
Through foggy roads...to light ahead? Beautifully expressed! Enjoyed reading it!
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