tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post1079058152552290619..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Scarred, Then MarredLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-7693145719593815732011-09-10T19:03:03.218-05:002011-09-10T19:03:03.218-05:00sad indeed.
well told.sad indeed.<br />well told.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27160898845478266602011-09-09T20:15:28.043-05:002011-09-09T20:15:28.043-05:00Well expressed sad story
Anna :o]Well expressed sad story<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-64438577866074680052011-09-09T17:45:17.817-05:002011-09-09T17:45:17.817-05:00What a wonderfully sad story. Well composed and we...What a wonderfully sad story. Well composed and well written. Well done.ShonEjaihttp://www.picture-speak.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-83148450045397374692011-09-09T14:52:56.323-05:002011-09-09T14:52:56.323-05:00Sad and tragic, but such is life sometimes. Nicely...Sad and tragic, but such is life sometimes. Nicely written!<br />Here's my offering for this prompt: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/09/he-was-a-ford-man-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36085368589174224402011-09-09T12:15:40.630-05:002011-09-09T12:15:40.630-05:00...speeding teen love.
youth are always in such ......speeding teen love.<br /><br /><br />youth are always in such a hurry... always have been and alway will be. Very nice (tragic) write.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72889746616513363242011-09-08T13:35:53.565-05:002011-09-08T13:35:53.565-05:00Short and neat, but very well done. Thank you.Short and neat, but very well done. Thank you.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37931851647709806462011-09-07T18:38:25.244-05:002011-09-07T18:38:25.244-05:00I love the way you have used repetition to reinfor...I love the way you have used repetition to reinforce some of these lines. You give a second chance at digesting their meaning. Love this poem. :)Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-60324138169253105092011-09-07T04:03:18.234-05:002011-09-07T04:03:18.234-05:00That was very power-packed piece...
You have such ...That was very power-packed piece...<br />You have such a wealth of emotion...Superb Magpie!Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-31896943469747547272011-09-06T20:09:05.130-05:002011-09-06T20:09:05.130-05:00A sad but so true tale in your poem. How often do ...A sad but so true tale in your poem. How often do we hear this story. So well expressed here in your repeated phrases.Ann Grenierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13501522748426995035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-16847088254377062332011-09-06T19:56:12.712-05:002011-09-06T19:56:12.712-05:00you convey it so well.you convey it so well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77032458352086596502011-09-05T20:45:36.508-05:002011-09-05T20:45:36.508-05:00This is a great take on the prompt! I like the ra...This is a great take on the prompt! I like the range of emotion ... traveled here.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5323512971265145972011-09-05T20:23:59.706-05:002011-09-05T20:23:59.706-05:00I love "a junkyard of memories"...nice.....I love "a junkyard of memories"...nice...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61036298585877204322011-09-05T19:20:59.196-05:002011-09-05T19:20:59.196-05:00Poignant poem that really touches me, Laurie. The...Poignant poem that really touches me, Laurie. The song Teen Angel plays in my mind as I read it. Beautifully done.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37630985819662957062011-09-05T16:02:09.459-05:002011-09-05T16:02:09.459-05:00Laurie, I loved this. Inadvertently marred, unint...Laurie, I loved this. Inadvertently marred, unintentionally scarred ~ a great line.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-87368871518953226732011-09-05T13:07:57.032-05:002011-09-05T13:07:57.032-05:00A beautifully sorrowful write.A beautifully sorrowful write.Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-15396511182623511332011-09-05T09:04:49.846-05:002011-09-05T09:04:49.846-05:00A sad piece, yet how many times this lesson has be...A sad piece, yet how many times this lesson has been learned, scarring the world and beyond.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46941573145669776982011-09-05T07:22:40.185-05:002011-09-05T07:22:40.185-05:00sad for sure...life was so much different when we ...sad for sure...life was so much different when we were young, until it started leaving those scars...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27816023747689139112011-09-05T05:47:20.139-05:002011-09-05T05:47:20.139-05:00Scarred, then marred. Rather moving take on the p...Scarred, then marred. Rather moving take on the prompt.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61088333236746225502011-09-05T05:23:40.049-05:002011-09-05T05:23:40.049-05:00Excellent weaving of words.♥Excellent weaving of words.♥Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-56287199648360970062011-09-05T04:04:18.204-05:002011-09-05T04:04:18.204-05:00I really enjoyed the re-threading of the first ver...I really enjoyed the re-threading of the first verse in the third -- well done...robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1407696661660744442011-09-05T02:42:52.838-05:002011-09-05T02:42:52.838-05:00I like this very much. I like the way you have rep...I like this very much. I like the way you have repeated and inverted lines from the first stanza. Excellent work!jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70367114769999727622011-09-04T22:52:45.316-05:002011-09-04T22:52:45.316-05:00Wow! That's excellent!Wow! That's excellent!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-60240093504264981522011-09-04T21:42:33.675-05:002011-09-04T21:42:33.675-05:00kind of sad, well done.kind of sad, well done.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43447836399925908182011-09-04T21:11:27.813-05:002011-09-04T21:11:27.813-05:00That has such a ring of truth to it!That has such a ring of truth to it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-430159455085913662011-09-04T21:06:31.155-05:002011-09-04T21:06:31.155-05:00So sad.So sad.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com