tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post1218693049963486805..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Time Won’t WaitLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-66131367019205628112011-11-15T21:16:51.425-06:002011-11-15T21:16:51.425-06:00Excellent poem. I like the opening simile.Excellent poem. I like the opening simile.Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-11999004137019646302011-11-13T17:51:52.148-06:002011-11-13T17:51:52.148-06:00Perfect opening lines, Laurie. Great poem!
SaraPerfect opening lines, Laurie. Great poem!<br /><br />SaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-64916818603645703362011-11-09T04:01:39.991-06:002011-11-09T04:01:39.991-06:00Love it. Love the metaphors. So creative and uniqu...Love it. Love the metaphors. So creative and unique. As someone who wrestles with time all the time, I really needed this:)<br /><br />Thanks Laurie, for your lovely comments on my blog.Adura Ojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72091461421117506442011-11-08T23:22:57.707-06:002011-11-08T23:22:57.707-06:00value of time is well described :)value of time is well described :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-820960686007306642011-11-08T18:38:23.177-06:002011-11-08T18:38:23.177-06:00Time doesn’t sit by the back
door like a hungry do...Time doesn’t sit by the back<br />door like a hungry dog....Love it!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-41579656673669861162011-11-08T15:16:15.319-06:002011-11-08T15:16:15.319-06:00unique write... grand metaphors make this a great ...unique write... grand metaphors make this a great & tight read enjoyed it a lot!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03359959975341890512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-6830137153897851992011-11-08T13:21:22.012-06:002011-11-08T13:21:22.012-06:00Love that ending!Love that ending!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54562848367023755582011-11-08T10:36:49.926-06:002011-11-08T10:36:49.926-06:00Breaking the bondage of time is a very Zen thing, ...Breaking the bondage of time is a very Zen thing, I've heard.Philip Thrifthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03021615111948806998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-30144070924681011662011-11-07T19:05:07.665-06:002011-11-07T19:05:07.665-06:00Yes, Laurie, time waits for no one....keeps marchi...Yes, Laurie, time waits for no one....keeps marching on, and we must find a way to utilze it to our advantage, knowint it is so limited.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32721104112848254752011-11-07T18:57:14.336-06:002011-11-07T18:57:14.336-06:00yes, time runs fast indeed ~
lovely share ~yes, time runs fast indeed ~<br /><br />lovely share ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-13365887675378106942011-11-07T14:52:29.060-06:002011-11-07T14:52:29.060-06:00a trail
of conditioned modalities...brilliantly s...a trail <br />of conditioned modalities...brilliantly said.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90795701758589449552011-11-07T14:26:59.189-06:002011-11-07T14:26:59.189-06:00You're so right, time never sits and waits, an...You're so right, time never sits and waits, and we can't control it...so well said, Lauri, from a fresh and different point of view. Who said everything worth saying has already been said? Obviously not true.<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-85511794253033588092011-11-07T14:14:51.574-06:002011-11-07T14:14:51.574-06:00Wow, I love the fresh take and the cool images in ...Wow, I love the fresh take and the cool images in this poem. Time at the back door like a hungry dog....way cool!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27222622811207166562011-11-07T13:22:59.160-06:002011-11-07T13:22:59.160-06:00Great imagery in this poem!Great imagery in this poem!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-88941400792133261232011-11-07T13:02:52.556-06:002011-11-07T13:02:52.556-06:00this is something new - dog comparisons. i honestl...this is something new - dog comparisons. i honestly admit i never would have thought of it this way - but it works very nicely!Lillyhttp://summaryofmysoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-44910713634143538342011-11-07T12:26:42.604-06:002011-11-07T12:26:42.604-06:00Wonderful Won't Wait poem! I really like the d...Wonderful Won't Wait poem! I really like the dog images. I was having trouble thinking of anything that won't wait, but time is certainly something that doesn't wait! Thank you for visiting my blog and commenting too.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-899065398150162482011-11-07T11:54:21.651-06:002011-11-07T11:54:21.651-06:00But I don't think time ever lets go of our lea...But I don't think time ever lets go of our leash...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-44353329104558734942011-11-07T11:23:39.145-06:002011-11-07T11:23:39.145-06:00Nicely done, love how you put it together! Breakin...Nicely done, love how you put it together! Breaking free of time does certainly make it different! Reminds me of my husband's Cree family teaching us about time.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-80975598623538654102011-11-07T10:44:05.480-06:002011-11-07T10:44:05.480-06:00Time waits for no man (or woman for that matter!)....Time waits for no man (or woman for that matter!).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23794432292872020242011-11-07T10:37:17.903-06:002011-11-07T10:37:17.903-06:00A really fresh, unique way of looking at how time ...A really fresh, unique way of looking at how time runs us, until we break free... Love the ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3411788835295755152011-11-07T09:32:05.659-06:002011-11-07T09:32:05.659-06:00Your use of extended metaphor is really superb. Su...Your use of extended metaphor is really superb. Such an unusual comparison you chose here, yet it works so well.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com