tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post2323612817001418791..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: PilLOWedLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-83484555197769182342012-08-01T07:40:49.724-05:002012-08-01T07:40:49.724-05:00Great write for the prompt. Compelling with a smi...Great write for the prompt. Compelling with a smile within.Sean Vesseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509793249114004395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59602944275586437462012-07-30T01:26:37.706-05:002012-07-30T01:26:37.706-05:00That is what reminds me how poetry can be so beaut...That is what reminds me how poetry can be so beautiful...<br /><br />That pillow talk is really very essential for the peace...I loved it...Tweetyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15370849911077398353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-10985576109128620422012-07-28T01:23:50.824-05:002012-07-28T01:23:50.824-05:00Great, Laurie. Love the "fluffy adjectives&q...Great, Laurie. Love the "fluffy adjectives"; never thought of that adjective for adjectives... I find the actual premise of the poem quite hard to believe, though. I'd never fall asleep listening to you! Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/07/28/corner-shelf-onstage/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52969444849719709842012-07-27T17:42:42.442-05:002012-07-27T17:42:42.442-05:00Nicely done. (Certainly when I open up people fal...Nicely done. (Certainly when I open up people fall asleep; to the best of my knowledge, they don't listen.)J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-55409770615726568272012-07-27T15:25:34.693-05:002012-07-27T15:25:34.693-05:00Very nice. The use of two stressed syllables in ea...Very nice. The use of two stressed syllables in each line gives the poem form. And it has a definite ending and a conclusion at the end. It is moral. I like it.Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77770289083681901492012-07-27T11:16:15.361-05:002012-07-27T11:16:15.361-05:00Nice. I often say "cut the crap" to myse...Nice. I often say "cut the crap" to myself after I read some of my own stuff! Yours has NEVER made me fall asleep, though!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1868504556016021022012-07-26T15:47:43.149-05:002012-07-26T15:47:43.149-05:00Being sleep inducing is in, eh? Naah, your voice i...Being sleep inducing is in, eh? Naah, your voice is respected and sleep is out of the question.<br /><br />Nice write, Laurie. :)Vaishali Jainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05534545110306124811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48383984213049335912012-07-26T10:46:24.985-05:002012-07-26T10:46:24.985-05:00Words count! they do! thanks-Words count! they do! thanks-izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34282065670627850912012-07-25T21:29:24.123-05:002012-07-25T21:29:24.123-05:00Beautiful. Love the poetic pillow here. This is on...Beautiful. Love the poetic pillow here. This is one of my favorite poems of yours.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59082219201158005852012-07-25T19:58:51.403-05:002012-07-25T19:58:51.403-05:00I like this a lot. Love the line "the hazard ...I like this a lot. Love the line "the hazard trap-" There are a few of those. Like the snap and crackle and then the soft pop.Elleceehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049386448865741626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-71100050663219418982012-07-25T19:22:46.139-05:002012-07-25T19:22:46.139-05:00Yes, we stamp our foot down, Laurie! If they don&#...Yes, we stamp our foot down, Laurie! If they don't wish to listen it's their problem!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90545629604720831052012-07-25T18:44:08.185-05:002012-07-25T18:44:08.185-05:00A bit of sassiness here, I like it!A bit of sassiness here, I like it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48557051032670829822012-07-25T18:37:50.862-05:002012-07-25T18:37:50.862-05:00Beautiful Laurie. Like a comforting song I'm s...Beautiful Laurie. Like a comforting song I'm sure that the sound is gentle. :)Archna Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838906796617874529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54011279609605661742012-07-25T18:14:19.000-05:002012-07-25T18:14:19.000-05:00I LOVE the opening lines..I LOVE the opening lines..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-66055108714379749982012-07-25T17:39:25.293-05:002012-07-25T17:39:25.293-05:00No danger of that when we read the wordzzzzzzz...No danger of that when we read the wordzzzzzzz...Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-19546151973289686262012-07-25T17:28:44.595-05:002012-07-25T17:28:44.595-05:00I believe it was Stephen King.I believe it was Stephen King.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-40165752578719350432012-07-25T17:26:13.992-05:002012-07-25T17:26:13.992-05:00LOL
"Cut the crap" is perfect. (Who was ...LOL<br />"Cut the crap" is perfect. (Who was it who wrote without adverbs? Did he write without adjectives, too?<br />Oh, my wasted brain.)<br />Very well done, Laurie. <br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-13927127003627515872012-07-25T17:23:14.044-05:002012-07-25T17:23:14.044-05:00love the spirit in this poem,
and a lullaby voice ...love the spirit in this poem,<br />and a lullaby voice is so needed<br />in the world, especially now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47346273341284501972012-07-25T16:35:52.782-05:002012-07-25T16:35:52.782-05:00Your words are snappy...a shining example.Your words are snappy...a shining example.Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27262514546804499072012-07-25T16:31:36.071-05:002012-07-25T16:31:36.071-05:00Wise advice..But you always write with just the ri...Wise advice..But you always write with just the right amount of words. :)Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-29618969645903146712012-07-25T16:09:43.822-05:002012-07-25T16:09:43.822-05:00"when I open up people listen then fall aslee..."when I open up people listen then fall asleep." The question is do they fall asleep during or after you open up.<br /><br />I like the curve of the poem; makes me want to lean my head against it and fall asleep.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-41529863846989699572012-07-25T14:26:29.021-05:002012-07-25T14:26:29.021-05:00I'm in agreement with Kerry!! You really rocke...I'm in agreement with Kerry!! You really rocked the brevity Laurie!! Well done!!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18956482181953498702012-07-25T13:09:52.295-05:002012-07-25T13:09:52.295-05:00Great opening:
"Cut the crap,
the hazard trap...Great opening:<br />"Cut the crap,<br />the hazard trap"<br /><br />And isn't that the way? People would typically rather listen to their own voices.flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-49050509466734030672012-07-25T12:06:49.785-05:002012-07-25T12:06:49.785-05:00Well, I'm certainly not sleepy here. Great wr...Well, I'm certainly not sleepy here. Great write!Teresahttp://razzamadazzlewordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-9898009166425285322012-07-25T11:37:16.918-05:002012-07-25T11:37:16.918-05:00no unclear message here! I love the command to &#...no unclear message here! I love the command to 'cut the crap'! and now it's time for a nap...joannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18255189465024912528noreply@blogger.com