tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post2540699107811497718..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Sunday Offerings/ 6-26-11Laurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-83673659114999907502011-07-10T19:52:44.963-05:002011-07-10T19:52:44.963-05:00That "mechanical dippy bird" - such a gr...That "mechanical dippy bird" - such a great image for that type of passionless kiss. I like how you told this story.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-63184894943601235652011-06-29T07:56:29.137-05:002011-06-29T07:56:29.137-05:00Excellent pair of poems. I like your take on the ...Excellent pair of poems. I like your take on the wordle; very different from my own and the others I've read so far. :)Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61413814567091666572011-06-29T07:09:36.573-05:002011-06-29T07:09:36.573-05:00Laurie,
I absolutely loved the first poem. I love...Laurie,<br /><br />I absolutely loved the first poem. I loved the build-up to that question!!!!<br /><br />Sorry for my lateness in commenting...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47737977918830736022011-06-29T04:49:43.925-05:002011-06-29T04:49:43.925-05:00Two good poems, Laurie. I particularly lik your t...Two good poems, Laurie. I particularly lik your take on the wordle, and using Grace as a name was clever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23215924772427071082011-06-28T17:50:41.644-05:002011-06-28T17:50:41.644-05:00A very powerful poem.A very powerful poem.Jo Bryanthttp://www.jobryant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36250304446060784692011-06-28T14:24:14.227-05:002011-06-28T14:24:14.227-05:00perfect.perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-67431958966825641622011-06-28T10:31:50.352-05:002011-06-28T10:31:50.352-05:00for the sake of grace....this really touched me..v...for the sake of grace....this really touched me..very fine writeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-80263369354494115012011-06-28T06:07:25.987-05:002011-06-28T06:07:25.987-05:00For the Sake of Grace = 5 Stars. I'm shaking.For the Sake of Grace = 5 Stars. I'm shaking.Raining Iguanashttp://rainingiguanas.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62747296328098462792011-06-27T14:45:16.896-05:002011-06-27T14:45:16.896-05:00We all seek grace in our own way, I guess!! Maybe ...We all seek grace in our own way, I guess!! Maybe he WAS having a religious experience!!<br /> Dippy bird...thumbs up...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-11037604396520455692011-06-27T14:20:10.747-05:002011-06-27T14:20:10.747-05:00Rocketed truly rocks.......that euphoria will get ...Rocketed truly rocks.......that euphoria will get us every time....well pennedAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1479954745111992342011-06-27T14:13:56.980-05:002011-06-27T14:13:56.980-05:00I too had to go back and read this over again........I too had to go back and read this over again......Grace was a woman. This is beyond excellent.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-68973354608511285152011-06-27T12:09:03.265-05:002011-06-27T12:09:03.265-05:00Whoa!
Grace is not always the blessing it seems t...Whoa!<br />Grace is not always the blessing it seems to be. ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-88093203267163545932011-06-27T06:56:13.023-05:002011-06-27T06:56:13.023-05:00Some great lines there, I am with the others, I lo...Some great lines there, I am with the others, I love dippy bird kisses. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34862348140277524802011-06-27T01:27:55.621-05:002011-06-27T01:27:55.621-05:00These are amazing Laurie! I love the raw emotion a...These are amazing Laurie! I love the raw emotion and the exquisite imagery of the first and the flow and rhythm of the second is amazingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-8496991356483457872011-06-26T23:19:21.284-05:002011-06-26T23:19:21.284-05:00Oh, Oh! Someone's in trouble!
Both lovely piec...Oh, Oh! Someone's in trouble!<br />Both lovely pieces, but I'm with the majority, the first has a knockout ending!The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54740391328079519402011-06-26T22:50:22.944-05:002011-06-26T22:50:22.944-05:00Really like that first piece on Grace....the secon...Really like that first piece on Grace....the second too..but the first my favorite...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-40696195351683934702011-06-26T22:47:09.562-05:002011-06-26T22:47:09.562-05:00wow. both are so different and unique.
terrific wr...wow. both are so different and unique.<br />terrific writing both!<br />LunaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62117972401314002212011-06-26T21:51:56.266-05:002011-06-26T21:51:56.266-05:00Both really good poems, but I especially liked the...Both really good poems, but I especially liked the first one - age-old story but you gave it new language - I love the dippy-bird kisses - well done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-78133331710932525612011-06-26T21:23:15.250-05:002011-06-26T21:23:15.250-05:00Ouch on the first, perhaps the second one is your ...Ouch on the first, perhaps the second one is your grace.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90389325881543745082011-06-26T19:39:01.507-05:002011-06-26T19:39:01.507-05:00Thank you!Thank you!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23006015375058844592011-06-26T18:55:36.649-05:002011-06-26T18:55:36.649-05:00The first poem was quite well done. Some well use...The first poem was quite well done. Some well used word choices and metaphors. Really enjoyed it.markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-7405622653015482011-06-26T15:29:14.126-05:002011-06-26T15:29:14.126-05:00Lost my comment! Wanted you to know I loved them ...Lost my comment! Wanted you to know I loved them both!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-85607287660732933702011-06-26T15:09:03.906-05:002011-06-26T15:09:03.906-05:00Holy Cow! Laurie the wordle poem is hard-hitting. ...Holy Cow! Laurie the wordle poem is hard-hitting. Ouch! Well done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-29291327855168526072011-06-26T13:48:20.873-05:002011-06-26T13:48:20.873-05:00Reminding you to join jingle poetry potluck week 4...Reminding you to join jingle poetry potluck week 41 tonight.<br />Any poems are welcome.<br />Cheers.<br />Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!<br />Bless your weekend.<br />xoxoxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77350554311275282542011-06-26T13:48:01.898-05:002011-06-26T13:48:01.898-05:00superb piece.
smiles.superb piece.<br />smiles.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com