tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post2693843456770280154..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: DeteriorationLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12512421583177438002012-03-08T19:11:39.792-06:002012-03-08T19:11:39.792-06:00This is so sad but hopefully she finds her way ~ ...This is so sad but hopefully she finds her way ~ <br /><br />"Signs hide in a<br />cloak of denial and justification- but I can read<br />between the lines, offer a shoulder to lean on. "<br /><br />Great write ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-76906224239109026992012-03-08T18:21:47.500-06:002012-03-08T18:21:47.500-06:00Laurie - you went to the deep end, and came out wi...Laurie - you went to the deep end, and came out with something so strong that speaks to so many. Resonates. Wow.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34782975640416080682012-03-08T15:07:41.138-06:002012-03-08T15:07:41.138-06:00A shoulder to lean on ~ what those struggling with...A shoulder to lean on ~ what those struggling with addiction need. This is impressive poetry.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-81131401921398772902012-03-08T12:22:16.937-06:002012-03-08T12:22:16.937-06:00*Sighs* This is all so sad, been all to close to s...*Sighs* This is all so sad, been all to close to someone else's addiction too.<br />Thank goodness she has you to lean on Laurie.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-45043111807043760932012-03-08T10:45:03.591-06:002012-03-08T10:45:03.591-06:00This has some powerful lines Laurie....that first...This has some powerful lines Laurie....that first line really grabs you. Thank God for shoulders that are there for those in need.Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12743209892580654292012-03-08T07:27:26.920-06:002012-03-08T07:27:26.920-06:00The beginning "Deterioration
She fondles dru...The beginning "Deterioration <br />She fondles drugs as if they were four-leaf clovers" drew me right in and held me there. A powerful write, Laurie!<br /><br />Here's mine:<br /><br />http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2012/03/crescendo-there-is-always-in-each-of-us.htmlMaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90772256299823303892012-03-08T00:02:03.395-06:002012-03-08T00:02:03.395-06:00very poignant, Laurie. i hear your heart in all yo...very poignant, Laurie. i hear your heart in all your words.<br />♥Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37868000670792987902012-03-07T16:07:52.552-06:002012-03-07T16:07:52.552-06:00when I woke up, oh...some 20 years ago, I realize ...when I woke up, oh...some 20 years ago, I realize two words had surrounded my Life...<br />justify and deny...with all the words I utilize today in my Life, seldom do I ever use them<br /><br />it hurts to even write them now<br /><br />I see you understand this poisonous cloak many live under<br /><br />shoulders are rare and precious...do take care of your own<br /><br />Peace ☮RDhttp://worldcoloredglasses.wordpress.com/2012/03/07/oh-nature/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32099381582427066112012-03-07T12:38:19.947-06:002012-03-07T12:38:19.947-06:00Another power-punch poem from you Laurie. Telling ...Another power-punch poem from you Laurie. Telling it like it is but with kindness. I enjoy your work so much.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37553923072872723152012-03-07T11:53:18.558-06:002012-03-07T11:53:18.558-06:00Laurie, this is wonderful. I am loving the weaving...Laurie, this is wonderful. I am loving the weaving in of the shoulder, and your friend's journey. Continued prayers.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-26348910506392991972012-03-07T11:04:11.662-06:002012-03-07T11:04:11.662-06:00Such a sad story...there are many like her today. ...Such a sad story...there are many like her today. Nice message here.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-2381804034530369192012-03-07T09:59:15.590-06:002012-03-07T09:59:15.590-06:00you know...i know someone just like her...looking ...you know...i know someone just like her...looking for luck in the wrong places..i am glad she has ou to walk it with her...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-58370412866928837462012-03-07T09:53:29.727-06:002012-03-07T09:53:29.727-06:00Oh my gosh, Laurie. What you did with that first l...Oh my gosh, Laurie. What you did with that first line-break right out of the box. Ugh. What a gut punch.<br /><br />This is a perfect capture of the abused child trying to keep living through adulthood, still broken and four inside.<br /><br />Wow.<br /><br />~Shawna<br />rosemarymint.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62783451352735689042012-03-06T14:51:38.544-06:002012-03-06T14:51:38.544-06:00Laurie, I am always awed by your talent. The openi...Laurie, I am always awed by your talent. The opening lines here are wonderful, pulled me in right away, and kept me till the end.Linda H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/01005584805379179415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-4970867054798005722012-03-06T12:04:30.633-06:002012-03-06T12:04:30.633-06:00"She fondles drugs as if they were four-
leaf..."She fondles drugs as if they were four-<br />leaf clovers"<br /><br />That shoulder is sure getting a workout of late. Wonderful read.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.com