tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post2878233179752856689..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Silent DeathLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32141304067733884372011-07-21T05:19:31.793-05:002011-07-21T05:19:31.793-05:00That was death by chocolate, I presume? :)That was death by chocolate, I presume? :)Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-41368210249826239252011-07-20T23:59:22.686-05:002011-07-20T23:59:22.686-05:00Intense and challenging. Would you consider changi...Intense and challenging. Would you consider changing "of" to "all" in line 3. <br />All good wishes.Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47560010702876178012011-07-19T22:05:00.466-05:002011-07-19T22:05:00.466-05:00Intriguing! It feels very Agatha Christie-like. :)...Intriguing! It feels very Agatha Christie-like. :)Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46746343071410589322011-07-19T11:46:59.900-05:002011-07-19T11:46:59.900-05:00I really like this. The last two lines are so, so...I really like this. The last two lines are so, so good.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-76022492377259621532011-07-19T10:18:38.182-05:002011-07-19T10:18:38.182-05:00Oohhhh .. remind me not to come near you at Willow...Oohhhh .. remind me not to come near you at Willow's Ball this year! Nicely written!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-76469730356410639242011-07-19T05:29:44.902-05:002011-07-19T05:29:44.902-05:00This has got to be the most surprising ending to d...This has got to be the most surprising ending to date.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32836419378312702272011-07-19T01:26:27.875-05:002011-07-19T01:26:27.875-05:00there is a noir whimsy, a foreboding mirth about t...there is a noir whimsy, a foreboding mirth about this piece that I find engaging...rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46755296382973399972011-07-18T20:29:57.886-05:002011-07-18T20:29:57.886-05:00Amazing write! Love this. : )Amazing write! Love this. : )Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00903678715925613725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5597936078014129682011-07-18T16:54:01.012-05:002011-07-18T16:54:01.012-05:00"Pandemonium broke out like acne." What ..."Pandemonium broke out like acne." What a great simile.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-39999386155148217452011-07-18T14:46:35.682-05:002011-07-18T14:46:35.682-05:00Intense and intriguing wordplay.Intense and intriguing wordplay.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-68302411830449357882011-07-18T14:34:18.839-05:002011-07-18T14:34:18.839-05:00So intriguing - love your last line. :)So intriguing - love your last line. :)Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48970427305310128082011-07-18T14:07:42.107-05:002011-07-18T14:07:42.107-05:00I never thought I'd ever see chocolate and Cho...I never thought I'd ever see chocolate and Chopin in the same line! Thankfully, I like both!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-16611166892662897492011-07-18T09:32:33.356-05:002011-07-18T09:32:33.356-05:00"pandemonium broke out like acne." Grea..."pandemonium broke out like acne." Great line!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61166539444142429092011-07-18T08:20:09.610-05:002011-07-18T08:20:09.610-05:00Wonderful! I love the imagery in the last two lin...Wonderful! I love the imagery in the last two lines especially!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com