tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post3364528899268156532..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Cloud CoverageLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84716241651267445742014-09-30T10:50:26.335-05:002014-09-30T10:50:26.335-05:00Very powerful use of the words.Very powerful use of the words.Mojo Writinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09457472397010589516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27198941688478155192014-09-29T14:25:14.450-05:002014-09-29T14:25:14.450-05:00Laurie,
Your poem reminded me of sad times when s...Laurie,<br /><br />Your poem reminded me of sad times when standing in an Irish graveyard,after a funeral service. Rain beating down without any mercy, to the point where the proceedings seemed to be hurried along...Dark clouds for a dark occasion..<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91815149225482331992014-09-27T10:25:42.108-05:002014-09-27T10:25:42.108-05:00A powerful write and very well written! A powerful write and very well written! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04848244926697218980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-39888095889714013522014-09-27T07:21:32.226-05:002014-09-27T07:21:32.226-05:00emotional, nicely written
Beyond Cloudsemotional, nicely written<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/09/beyond-clouds.html" rel="nofollow">Beyond Clouds</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-2336329833302794712014-09-26T23:43:46.760-05:002014-09-26T23:43:46.760-05:00Brilliant and powerful...Brilliant and powerful...Fascinating Questhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14203231510123916405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-21382658724638283232014-09-26T11:10:44.284-05:002014-09-26T11:10:44.284-05:00The use of weather to relate to turbulence is clas...The use of weather to relate to turbulence is classic. Great lines Laurie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1588987214634871372014-09-26T06:31:10.035-05:002014-09-26T06:31:10.035-05:00What a powerful opening. I like the weather mirror...What a powerful opening. I like the weather mirroring the human emotions around death. Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-68839525702549668022014-09-26T04:16:29.473-05:002014-09-26T04:16:29.473-05:00Yes, they do do that.Yes, they do do that.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-88943772387411554152014-09-26T02:59:20.045-05:002014-09-26T02:59:20.045-05:00Touching...beautifully writtenTouching...beautifully writtenPThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09777057015005418560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-74702772106532942752014-09-26T01:50:34.762-05:002014-09-26T01:50:34.762-05:00wonderful piece of writing
The Sunshinewonderful piece of writing<br /><br /><a href="http://blogthepoint.blogspot.com/2014/09/the-sunshine.html" rel="nofollow">The Sunshine</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37558606631468474042014-09-25T22:20:48.286-05:002014-09-25T22:20:48.286-05:00He has a lot to express in little or no time. Can ...He has a lot to express in little or no time. Can feel the emotions here.Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62224552324232685562014-09-25T18:05:42.814-05:002014-09-25T18:05:42.814-05:00The ending was ominous Laurie ~ I too appreciate ...The ending was ominous Laurie ~ I too appreciate the use of weather to capture character & emotional turbulence ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32692499656661916222014-09-25T17:01:56.911-05:002014-09-25T17:01:56.911-05:00Laurie this is amazing...I love the metaphor of th...Laurie this is amazing...I love the metaphor of the weather and the loss and relationship in bitterness....a powerful write!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-50003773829632531392014-09-25T14:55:14.218-05:002014-09-25T14:55:14.218-05:00'thunder is a reminder of many things-when it ...'thunder is a reminder of many things-when it comes it creates a shudder- a shiver of fear- very touching thought provoking lines 'clouds abuzz' deceased'merged with the ever living tree reflects the 'future positive'image and gives Hope Anjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-6975213766174398332014-09-24T22:33:29.274-05:002014-09-24T22:33:29.274-05:00stunning...I can feel the paralleling storms.stunning...I can feel the paralleling storms.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23438218199801324062014-09-24T22:24:24.223-05:002014-09-24T22:24:24.223-05:00What a heavy expression of heritage.What a heavy expression of heritage.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-75562690134624241752014-09-24T21:02:50.527-05:002014-09-24T21:02:50.527-05:00Very powerful and intense, Laurie - just like a th...Very powerful and intense, Laurie - just like a thunderstorm! Lovely write!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-21506383978283822462014-09-24T20:20:25.730-05:002014-09-24T20:20:25.730-05:00When I read this, it seemed to me like there could...When I read this, it seemed to me like there could be a good story here. This poem could be placed at the beginning of a novel to set the stage for the reader.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-83886788641094223722014-09-24T19:26:22.601-05:002014-09-24T19:26:22.601-05:00Intense and moving. A wonder invocation of pathet...Intense and moving. A wonder invocation of pathetic fallacy.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-16831754273114330902014-09-24T18:29:32.763-05:002014-09-24T18:29:32.763-05:00Love hurts and no more so when death makes a visit...Love hurts and no more so when death makes a visit. So beautifully written and illustrated Laurie.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48568541770577272082014-09-24T18:22:42.803-05:002014-09-24T18:22:42.803-05:00yikes....sounds like he may explode before this is...yikes....sounds like he may explode before this is over...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69771590665558261072014-09-24T15:52:47.497-05:002014-09-24T15:52:47.497-05:00I like the pathetic fallacy in your poem, Laurie.I like the pathetic fallacy in your poem, Laurie.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5867950979675016292014-09-24T15:51:37.349-05:002014-09-24T15:51:37.349-05:00An ominous gathering of clouds almost left hoverin...An ominous gathering of clouds almost left hovering over us ready to burst as we come to the end of this thunderous poemJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34167282238466521542014-09-24T14:53:55.429-05:002014-09-24T14:53:55.429-05:00wow! That was powerful!wow! That was powerful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-29301206960897127932014-09-24T14:45:18.272-05:002014-09-24T14:45:18.272-05:00That was intense. :-)That was intense. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com