tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post3623780643617390634..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: The Sea WaltzLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-80795286703054355922014-09-15T08:38:05.737-05:002014-09-15T08:38:05.737-05:00lovely....nice...lovely....nice...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-45831837102139723992014-09-15T02:58:49.335-05:002014-09-15T02:58:49.335-05:00This begs a melody to become a song, Laurie. Lovel...This begs a melody to become a song, Laurie. Lovely write!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-58261890048236428932014-09-13T00:36:16.989-05:002014-09-13T00:36:16.989-05:00repetition of one,two,three giving it a magical ef...repetition of one,two,three giving it a magical effect<br /><br /><a href="http://cifarshayar.blogspot.com/2014/09/see-sea.html" rel="nofollow">See The Sea</a>Cifarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435254563163870510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72690003148855342862014-09-12T12:38:24.787-05:002014-09-12T12:38:24.787-05:00Wonderful visual effect in this, the way those let...Wonderful visual effect in this, the way those letters echo the rhyme, the rhythm of the waves. I like the sly humor of the 2nd stanza too. Good write!James Brushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08401606367969855802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-82256407869933820622014-09-12T12:16:49.337-05:002014-09-12T12:16:49.337-05:00magical rhythm!!..swaying by the melodious waltzin...magical rhythm!!..swaying by the melodious waltzing waves...so dreamy...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18857834497654499232014-09-12T11:55:27.035-05:002014-09-12T11:55:27.035-05:00loved this melody a lot..loved this melody a lot..Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52890022258332547202014-09-12T10:45:09.807-05:002014-09-12T10:45:09.807-05:00a delightful waltz with the sea playing the melody...a delightful waltz with the sea playing the melody and the others in perfect harmony.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51720262131853334052014-09-12T09:10:45.967-05:002014-09-12T09:10:45.967-05:00Beautifully done, Laurie! I was especially caught...Beautifully done, Laurie! I was especially caught by the word "finespun." Perfection.Mary Ann Potterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10859843676283396203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-88870831032469849162014-09-11T19:30:36.776-05:002014-09-11T19:30:36.776-05:00Ah yes to sleep on a boat again would be fun.Ah yes to sleep on a boat again would be fun.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91273445350717629462014-09-11T19:06:03.739-05:002014-09-11T19:06:03.739-05:00This is so charming and free: a waltz across the ...This is so charming and free: a waltz across the sea - what could be more rollicking. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-21468805767566727062014-09-11T12:50:24.225-05:002014-09-11T12:50:24.225-05:00No wonder they only taught us country dancing at s...No wonder they only taught us country dancing at school...waltzing sounds much more fun Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47159134908402791612014-09-11T11:52:10.223-05:002014-09-11T11:52:10.223-05:00oh this is nice- rhythmic, the repetition is charm...oh this is nice- rhythmic, the repetition is charming<br /><br />much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38231043301048194452014-09-11T08:13:34.910-05:002014-09-11T08:13:34.910-05:00Nice days like this do have a lovely rhythm. Nice days like this do have a lovely rhythm. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48985876052229528892014-09-11T00:23:00.525-05:002014-09-11T00:23:00.525-05:00Interesting and steamy, this creates quite a pictu...Interesting and steamy, this creates quite a picture. alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-41680298037965191782014-09-10T20:42:21.502-05:002014-09-10T20:42:21.502-05:00I felt the rocking of the waves as I read. Well d...I felt the rocking of the waves as I read. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47905715360959455812014-09-10T20:33:36.670-05:002014-09-10T20:33:36.670-05:00'And when she sang, the sea,
Whatever self ...'And when she sang, the sea, <br />Whatever self it had, became the self<br />That was her song, for she was the maker.'beautiful song -has a touch of Wallace Stevens-<br />'she dances and becomes the dance herself'revolving in a trance'Anjum Wasim Darhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01252859337697790445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43389335943272251582014-09-10T18:57:03.413-05:002014-09-10T18:57:03.413-05:00Suggestive and funny too. I wasn't sure whethe...Suggestive and funny too. I wasn't sure whether she was catching rays of sunshine or rays the fish but the picture was getting blurred and steamy at that point!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38647386289078632792014-09-10T18:10:12.099-05:002014-09-10T18:10:12.099-05:00I love the waltz and now I'll be thinking of t...I love the waltz and now I'll be thinking of that beat whenever I get the chance to rock with the sea. Simple, yet brilliant--like most of your poems ☺Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-82389977586216617472014-09-10T17:56:34.167-05:002014-09-10T17:56:34.167-05:00Lovely description Laurie--though I even started f...Lovely description Laurie--though I even started feeling a little sea sick with the rocking! (My sea sick experience is a fairly recent one so it comes easily to mind)Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-20930868475267743142014-09-10T17:48:41.230-05:002014-09-10T17:48:41.230-05:00I like the rhythm
Well done.I like the rhythm <br /><br />Well done.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48611425011813680932014-09-10T16:32:06.502-05:002014-09-10T16:32:06.502-05:00Oh, indeed the sea sometimes seems to dance. You ...Oh, indeed the sea sometimes seems to dance. You have shown well the rhythm of its dance, Laurie.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3602924760087327662014-09-10T15:34:37.067-05:002014-09-10T15:34:37.067-05:00The dance of the wealthy yacht owners I guess.The dance of the wealthy yacht owners I guess.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27069304315261654932014-09-10T15:27:34.731-05:002014-09-10T15:27:34.731-05:00What a song! It is different than what I see/hear...What a song! It is different than what I see/hear by the sea, mine is more classicalragingthat damnce music, but I sure like this melody and its harmonies.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-13868812702141729832014-09-10T14:54:12.024-05:002014-09-10T14:54:12.024-05:00I love the rhythm in this poem! Nothing like being...I love the rhythm in this poem! Nothing like being lulled to sleep by the waves.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25925806070968840372014-09-10T14:37:14.869-05:002014-09-10T14:37:14.869-05:00steamy Hot! :) and really sings... maybe you shoul...steamy Hot! :) and really sings... maybe you should add some music to it! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16765039970274452443noreply@blogger.com