tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post3969751580518192986..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Become...Laurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger43125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-22059683657071597582012-10-19T11:59:03.383-05:002012-10-19T11:59:03.383-05:00Stellar piece - the right words, the right flow, t...Stellar piece - the right words, the right flow, the right images. Stellar!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-7997279800318157852012-10-17T23:44:03.920-05:002012-10-17T23:44:03.920-05:00I love the way you put words together. This is re...I love the way you put words together. This is really nice. "throttlehold of fear" and "umbrella meshed with coal" -- I love how you do this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5345154236495410782012-10-17T13:35:34.975-05:002012-10-17T13:35:34.975-05:00It's an exciting process, and you've captu...It's an exciting process, and you've captured it well.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3192768760963454622012-10-16T14:16:23.763-05:002012-10-16T14:16:23.763-05:00Very powerful, Laurie! I love the repetition of: &...Very powerful, Laurie! I love the repetition of: "Become the thunder you want to hear."Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-8422373684514623492012-10-16T13:45:55.967-05:002012-10-16T13:45:55.967-05:00"let the shifts shape you." Perfect stri..."let the shifts shape you." Perfect string of words and wonderful writing. terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348440908615750286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-16406480696944255162012-10-16T11:17:06.879-05:002012-10-16T11:17:06.879-05:00Such a wonderful message beautifully told Laurie!!...Such a wonderful message beautifully told Laurie!!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-26501104728759166952012-10-16T04:40:30.743-05:002012-10-16T04:40:30.743-05:00I think it was Jung said, " in order to get t...I think it was Jung said, " in order to get to the light we must first enter the darkness" , thanks Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47765244875154554792012-10-15T19:09:39.380-05:002012-10-15T19:09:39.380-05:00another wonderful piece!
JJRod'zanother wonderful piece! <br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90116078580838733872012-10-15T18:19:09.552-05:002012-10-15T18:19:09.552-05:00poetry with wings... yes, that's it...poetry with wings... yes, that's it... ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/ss-outpost/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-29951732000885872042012-10-15T11:28:16.888-05:002012-10-15T11:28:16.888-05:00I liked the warning in the second stanza. How ofte...I liked the warning in the second stanza. How often have those excuses got in the way of our dreams. Sound advice here, if only we can follow. Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84116274636495894402012-10-15T10:41:13.768-05:002012-10-15T10:41:13.768-05:00Great inspirational piece. That is a strong openi...Great inspirational piece. That is a strong opening line! Solid. C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59397278603925513942012-10-15T10:11:58.810-05:002012-10-15T10:11:58.810-05:00I love the sound of the words in this as it is rea...I love the sound of the words in this as it is read aloud, it all comes together so well. Also the phrasing, as in: "Let the shifts shape you" Nicely penned, Laurie!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-17979604099584820402012-10-15T06:42:42.491-05:002012-10-15T06:42:42.491-05:00Really great ! quite the song.
Oddly I was wonderi...Really great ! quite the song.<br />Oddly I was wondering if there<br />was a smattering of starlight in this picture- and you brought thunder!<br />thanks.<br /><br /> izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-42215377254339031172012-10-15T05:46:27.185-05:002012-10-15T05:46:27.185-05:00Great advice!Great advice!Stan Skihttp://www.says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59268545094021493542012-10-15T00:46:18.269-05:002012-10-15T00:46:18.269-05:00A wonderful wordle poem,and the third stanza is su...A wonderful wordle poem,and the third stanza is sublime.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32634696626175259962012-10-15T00:09:34.610-05:002012-10-15T00:09:34.610-05:00I am trying hard to "Become the thunder"...I am trying hard to "Become the thunder" I love it!Dana Dampierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00711570817935555856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-11891843243573673092012-10-15T00:02:57.836-05:002012-10-15T00:02:57.836-05:00What a great job of blending the prompts Laurie .....What a great job of blending the prompts Laurie ... this is wonderful. I think the slight repetition gives the poem real power - I just love the idea of being the thunder that you want to hear ...<br /><br />http://leapinelephants.blogspot.ca/2012/10/to-become-light.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-53757651040333886432012-10-14T22:53:08.833-05:002012-10-14T22:53:08.833-05:00Laurie I love your poem. I had a very simple and ...Laurie I love your poem. I had a very simple and materialistic take on the cabin. You took it further with a spiritual response. Ravenhttp://nohwhere.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-87948933492540112162012-10-14T20:00:32.968-05:002012-10-14T20:00:32.968-05:00So beautiful, Laurie! I loved the opening line and...So beautiful, Laurie! I loved the opening line and thought immediately it was going to be my favorite. However, upon reading and rereading, every line is perfect. I think this is my favorite of yours. Gorgeous!Paula Wanken - When Words Escapehttp://whenwordsescape.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-4302232082722852422012-10-14T17:40:34.072-05:002012-10-14T17:40:34.072-05:00"Become the thunder you want to hear"., ..."Become the thunder you want to hear"., Laurie, I love that. Nice clear strong voice in the message. Well done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12715750137178436182012-10-14T16:16:19.351-05:002012-10-14T16:16:19.351-05:00marianv
Good use of words - compact and a releven...marianv<br /><br />Good use of words - compact and a relevent theme.marian Veverkahttp://marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-65777355562283999122012-10-14T15:06:20.900-05:002012-10-14T15:06:20.900-05:00Very inspirational Laurie. I think the repetition...Very inspirational Laurie. I think the repetition works well to add emphasis.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-26543340031397731792012-10-14T13:37:57.958-05:002012-10-14T13:37:57.958-05:00yes! Become the thunder- this is great!yes! Become the thunder- this is great!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-53958747627259371362012-10-14T13:37:41.559-05:002012-10-14T13:37:41.559-05:00I like the repetition of becoming the thunder you ...I like the repetition of becoming the thunder you want to hear ~ Nice one Laurie ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-22167730137178335742012-10-14T13:23:19.762-05:002012-10-14T13:23:19.762-05:00I love the drama of thunder...yes...become it! I love the drama of thunder...yes...become it! Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.com