tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post8365278676633302298..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: On the OutsideLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52103992345194947422012-10-11T16:24:12.492-05:002012-10-11T16:24:12.492-05:00Eerie end. Great form.Eerie end. Great form.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51453493665535880552012-10-11T10:13:52.388-05:002012-10-11T10:13:52.388-05:00beautiful! Like watching a leaf spiral to the grou...beautiful! Like watching a leaf spiral to the ground in the autumn, watching a life slowly end. Sad and moving. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34079365524299002352012-10-10T16:25:28.110-05:002012-10-10T16:25:28.110-05:00Oh that ending....spiralling down to one's gra...Oh that ending....spiralling down to one's grave. Vividly intense.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5780325200951094162012-10-10T14:36:35.341-05:002012-10-10T14:36:35.341-05:00Breathtakingly stark, leaving one helpless.Breathtakingly stark, leaving one helpless.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69921356171560811842012-10-10T14:26:39.995-05:002012-10-10T14:26:39.995-05:00Loved the emphasis given by the placement of those...Loved the emphasis given by the placement of those last words. Excellent.Grandma`s Goulashhttp://grandmas-goulash.info/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59397528543425336892012-10-10T14:11:34.745-05:002012-10-10T14:11:34.745-05:00oh how sad.oh how sad.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54432666568435196232012-10-10T13:54:44.485-05:002012-10-10T13:54:44.485-05:00oooh, dug the grave with a fork, too...
Yikes, tim...oooh, dug the grave with a fork, too...<br />Yikes, time to walk! <br />Well Done I enjoyed it~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3700859811465909992012-10-10T13:30:12.056-05:002012-10-10T13:30:12.056-05:00How hard it is to have to stand and watch someone ...How hard it is to have to stand and watch someone self-destruct--you gave words to this feeling, accurate, affecting, sadly beautiful.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10858791213787473858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25701101538940656872012-10-10T12:52:38.113-05:002012-10-10T12:52:38.113-05:00ha i like how you use the venn diagram in this lau...ha i like how you use the venn diagram in this laurie...def sad way to spend a life...or an afterlife...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-14533485179648397922012-10-10T12:48:25.320-05:002012-10-10T12:48:25.320-05:00walking around in circles really does push you dow...walking around in circles really does push you down the plug hole..literally..or otherwise..jaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70462977909702971662012-10-10T10:04:53.042-05:002012-10-10T10:04:53.042-05:00Wow! That was so visual! Great job!Wow! That was so visual! Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-64422670154555096162012-10-10T09:32:50.515-05:002012-10-10T09:32:50.515-05:00Oh wow.... how sad. This leaves nothing to the ima...Oh wow.... how sad. This leaves nothing to the imagination at all. Such a sad way to live to...the grave.... shudders.<br />Gripping. Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com