tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post8370899197654694971..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: The DiaryLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77100405091776228842013-01-11T18:12:52.863-06:002013-01-11T18:12:52.863-06:00You made something real and so sad out of this pro...You made something real and so sad out of this prompt. I have to reread to see why I have a feeling of such unrest after reading it. I think it's for all the poor souls this highlights. Wonderful job.<br />Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-56643652481223367702013-01-05T22:32:33.095-06:002013-01-05T22:32:33.095-06:00This is haunting:
killer pace, this endless need f...This is haunting:<br />killer pace, this endless need for idle<br />thrills dangerously lurking on a golden precipice<br />of delusion until a new personality blossomed,<br />an evil twin oddly opposite from the girl;<br /><br />(blogger reformatted, sorry!)<br />The piece has an eerie feel. It reads like the beginning of a novel I don't want to put down.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-20280868114856177932013-01-05T18:55:51.312-06:002013-01-05T18:55:51.312-06:00I see nothing wrong with a little bit of recurring...I see nothing wrong with a little bit of recurring debauchery!<br /><br />Interesting style - looking forward to see where you take it.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-28080510742506218742013-01-05T08:21:10.840-06:002013-01-05T08:21:10.840-06:00This seems a new departure for you - a very promis...This seems a new departure for you - a very promising one, another string to your bow? Very impressive.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12728575007053349112013-01-05T05:12:13.137-06:002013-01-05T05:12:13.137-06:00But is it true? May we really blame others for our...But is it true? May we really blame others for our own shortcomings? It is a serious question. We are indeed social creatures. But relationships may be abandoned. So to put it bluntly: Can a person be lead, be driven, to commit suicide?Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-89906600952905863462013-01-04T17:14:05.832-06:002013-01-04T17:14:05.832-06:00Very well done...and sadly realistic.Very well done...and sadly realistic.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43469382001449685422013-01-04T02:35:42.584-06:002013-01-04T02:35:42.584-06:00Laurie, turning this into a diary that recounts al...Laurie, turning this into a diary that recounts all the changes... brill. She sort of flushes down the toilet, in a way. I loved it. Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/01/04/twofer/Sharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-89319734861780542982013-01-03T16:14:02.564-06:002013-01-03T16:14:02.564-06:00this is very good laurie - i want to read more.this is very good laurie - i want to read more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69446615024994895892013-01-03T15:49:43.498-06:002013-01-03T15:49:43.498-06:00This is tense and emotional.
Fortunately, this is ...This is tense and emotional.<br />Fortunately, this is outside of my experience.<br />Your description is vivid and compelling.<br />The ending is sad.<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52789536511228290092013-01-03T15:35:28.531-06:002013-01-03T15:35:28.531-06:00LOVE your use of the prompt words, Laurie! brillia...LOVE your use of the prompt words, Laurie! brilliant!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-11426867906407840882013-01-03T14:14:52.959-06:002013-01-03T14:14:52.959-06:00Oh, yes, Laurie, this is super.
KOh, yes, Laurie, this is super. <br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-40824201534837085022013-01-03T12:05:09.460-06:002013-01-03T12:05:09.460-06:00I alwsay think that twin is gone...and he just kee...I alwsay think that twin is gone...and he just keeps reappearing, and he is so charming and convincing...lol. Loved the use of the words and the mountain of character and description you fit into such a small postage stamp of an area. I feel like I watched Girl Interupted and it took only seconds to read....twice. Love that.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59883921033024219822013-01-03T11:51:41.289-06:002013-01-03T11:51:41.289-06:00addiction will take you down that slippery slopeaddiction will take you down that slippery slopeSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27389414813104444912013-01-03T11:41:30.990-06:002013-01-03T11:41:30.990-06:00You've plunged these words deep into a very me...You've plunged these words deep into a very meaningful piece, Laurie!! Great work. :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70472175255164575422013-01-03T10:37:18.536-06:002013-01-03T10:37:18.536-06:00A very interesting take on the prompt.A very interesting take on the prompt.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25204775223091374362013-01-03T08:53:36.959-06:002013-01-03T08:53:36.959-06:00Well done Laurie! Addiction has more than one twin...Well done Laurie! Addiction has more than one twin~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12988362811152854252013-01-03T02:05:05.472-06:002013-01-03T02:05:05.472-06:00Addiction is a beast. I wrote in my diary when you...Addiction is a beast. I wrote in my diary when young. It was a sad thing...so glad I weathered my sometimes stormy world. Great work Laurie!!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59207672978194439192013-01-03T00:45:35.517-06:002013-01-03T00:45:35.517-06:00Diaries are so easily misunderstood. Mind you I th...Diaries are so easily misunderstood. Mind you I think all of us have evil twin inside us.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-55289692670650684142013-01-02T22:59:12.630-06:002013-01-02T22:59:12.630-06:00Oh man, that ending! Love it. You did a great job ...Oh man, that ending! Love it. You did a great job using all these words in such a tight space. I'm impressed! What a sad story, though.<br /><br />I really like the juxtaposition of "unspooling" and "spiraling."jasmine calyxhttp://jasminecalyx.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61201436946768227882013-01-02T22:52:29.385-06:002013-01-02T22:52:29.385-06:00Way to use those words ~~ in not one, but two chal...Way to use those words ~~ in not one, but two challenges!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-39587870060867746542013-01-02T22:11:28.223-06:002013-01-02T22:11:28.223-06:00A rather sad commentary nicely done.A rather sad commentary nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-71929721339539184372013-01-02T22:11:28.027-06:002013-01-02T22:11:28.027-06:00A rather sad commentary nicely done.A rather sad commentary nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72789321042865285962013-01-02T18:34:32.684-06:002013-01-02T18:34:32.684-06:00Idle thrills and retorts certainly can put off som...Idle thrills and retorts certainly can put off someone. Even from different end of the scale both put unnecessary pressure nonetheless. Sad, but can't blame her. Nicely Laurie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-82533153335644983112013-01-02T17:12:44.534-06:002013-01-02T17:12:44.534-06:00Oh my, it definitely sounds like her life led her ...Oh my, it definitely sounds like her life led her to a logical place. Sadly enough.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-22659892210611597492013-01-02T16:49:39.051-06:002013-01-02T16:49:39.051-06:00Ouch, Laurie! Ouch. Perhaps this will work as a g...Ouch, Laurie! Ouch. Perhaps this will work as a good warning; I hope it is not a memorial. Sharpness!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com