tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post8445257412263262102..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Danger on the Other SideLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-42850061723673945242011-11-16T04:52:08.849-06:002011-11-16T04:52:08.849-06:00Excellent advice and cleverly wrought.Excellent advice and cleverly wrought.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-19423449841477204912011-11-15T23:01:39.211-06:002011-11-15T23:01:39.211-06:00I love the way one images fades into the next, and...I love the way one images fades into the next, and there is a general tension throughout. Very nice!Matt Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09276531398959895160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36329789898614242502011-11-15T13:38:37.017-06:002011-11-15T13:38:37.017-06:00To me, this spoke of the fears of a mother watchin...To me, this spoke of the fears of a mother watching her young child go out, unaccompanied, for the first time. The mother's imagination (algae becoming asps) and the single line she can utter, "Stay on this side of the fence."<br /><br />Kay, Alberta, Canada<br />An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous TravelKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-50262871110360339692011-11-15T11:27:43.677-06:002011-11-15T11:27:43.677-06:00Great images in this. Very nicely done!Great images in this. Very nicely done!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62896121630276637442011-11-15T08:47:50.399-06:002011-11-15T08:47:50.399-06:00loved it.the realistic details make the symbolic i...loved it.the realistic details make the symbolic impact even greater.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69831565423002656332011-11-15T02:53:49.903-06:002011-11-15T02:53:49.903-06:00I'll definitely stay on this side of the fence...I'll definitely stay on this side of the fence!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48357777393377748702011-11-15T02:27:16.778-06:002011-11-15T02:27:16.778-06:00What an interesting turn your poem took. That last...What an interesting turn your poem took. That last line rings true for many garden paths...Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47594924211605910312011-11-14T23:00:43.725-06:002011-11-14T23:00:43.725-06:00Algae morphing into asps
A far cry from twinkling...Algae morphing into asps<br /><br />A far cry from twinkling stars!lolJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-64567941204789346622011-11-14T21:31:30.838-06:002011-11-14T21:31:30.838-06:00This is simple, just scary enough without over-doi...This is simple, just scary enough without over-doing it. Excellent.Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38225159195998608702011-11-14T20:25:52.737-06:002011-11-14T20:25:52.737-06:00A good write, Laurie.A good write, Laurie.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-64705444094795531502011-11-14T20:23:20.617-06:002011-11-14T20:23:20.617-06:00Yes, I believe I will stay on this side of the fen...Yes, I believe I will stay on this side of the fence. What imagery! So nicely done.Mary Ann Potterhttp://www.fromthestarcatcher.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-40088908330620319552011-11-14T18:11:41.844-06:002011-11-14T18:11:41.844-06:00Thanks for the warning ~
Happy monday ~Thanks for the warning ~<br /><br />Happy monday ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69537323625639881182011-11-14T15:47:21.566-06:002011-11-14T15:47:21.566-06:00I thought the grass was always greener. . . .I thought the grass was always greener. . . .Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25394398267643806642011-11-14T13:02:30.029-06:002011-11-14T13:02:30.029-06:00I will! Love this!I will! Love this!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84454131737243424762011-11-14T12:40:26.897-06:002011-11-14T12:40:26.897-06:00This is very clever, I'm smiling because this ...This is very clever, I'm smiling because this morning I really wanted to use the word 'asps' in a poem but I could not make it 'feel' right today:) So very well done again.Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.com