tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post8775740983791492929..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Backwards StoryLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-10372852581716871142011-12-01T03:53:31.103-06:002011-12-01T03:53:31.103-06:00That was a great last line which somehow managed t...That was a great last line which somehow managed to covey the 'backwards moving story' perfectly.Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3686431621452069572011-11-29T20:49:59.973-06:002011-11-29T20:49:59.973-06:00Great way to put this one together, it really work...Great way to put this one together, it really worked for me!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91297447762183843972011-11-29T16:02:59.063-06:002011-11-29T16:02:59.063-06:00This is a pleasure to read - tells a good story. I...This is a pleasure to read - tells a good story. I especially admire the last two lines - that totally works.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-11559626674374890622011-11-29T15:09:59.723-06:002011-11-29T15:09:59.723-06:00Oh, I have to repeat that the ending is so good in...Oh, I have to repeat that the ending is so good in this poem. I love the melancholy touch in some poems - this is one such.Jose Varghesehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14350131287578876247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-68415683763723321282011-11-29T11:24:44.367-06:002011-11-29T11:24:44.367-06:00I love the ending encircling the threaded thoughts...I love the ending encircling the threaded thoughts, like the eye of a needle! Very clever! I could feel the pain and the disjointed memories...so hauntingly sad!<br />Well Done~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01987164899521808331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-71588775868079561282011-11-29T10:36:24.484-06:002011-11-29T10:36:24.484-06:00This is so cool! The ending is amazing.This is so cool! The ending is amazing.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-58939450218304639942011-11-29T09:20:02.916-06:002011-11-29T09:20:02.916-06:00loved it.the backward movement was so cleverly cap...loved it.the backward movement was so cleverly captured.Its a mystery how you Marian or Mary write so many good poems with such frequency.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1477540563959150022011-11-29T01:08:17.829-06:002011-11-29T01:08:17.829-06:00in some countries, rain on ones wedding day is a g...in some countries, rain on ones wedding day is a good omen.<br /><br />you conveyed a deep sense of sadness in few words, Laurie. LOVE the last line especially!<br /><br />{your link at imaginary garden links back to imaginary garden instead of your blog.}<br /><br />♥ daniAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-20106171551149679342011-11-28T16:41:11.933-06:002011-11-28T16:41:11.933-06:00Ah, sometimes life is like that. Sad when it is.Ah, sometimes life is like that. Sad when it is.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-10313386245478457962011-11-28T14:25:20.966-06:002011-11-28T14:25:20.966-06:00Once upon a lonely wayward time..
I really like t...Once upon a lonely wayward time..<br /><br />I really like that the poem ends at the beginning of the story.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-7806746531903530982011-11-28T14:12:00.700-06:002011-11-28T14:12:00.700-06:00That one left me wondering.That one left me wondering.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23084386245856942232011-11-28T14:11:26.768-06:002011-11-28T14:11:26.768-06:00That one left me wondering.That one left me wondering.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.com