tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post8778501079775072170..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Breaking FreeLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43128568493623744792011-12-31T10:00:31.170-06:002011-12-31T10:00:31.170-06:00Impressively beautiful piece of writing.Impressively beautiful piece of writing.Altonianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23319533335629985752011-12-29T22:07:50.004-06:002011-12-29T22:07:50.004-06:00I really like what you did with the three words. b...I really like what you did with the three words. breaking down those fences.<br />Well done!<br />BlessingsBethe77https://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54890108499331963252011-12-29T21:53:55.863-06:002011-12-29T21:53:55.863-06:00The first stanza is a great set up for an insightf...The first stanza is a great set up for an insightful poem. Loved it.Pilar Touchardhttp://pilartouchard.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-30244892016435045182011-12-29T07:30:33.558-06:002011-12-29T07:30:33.558-06:00We do build those walls high, don't we, troubl...We do build those walls high, don't we, trouble is, then we're stuck behind them too.<br />Glad to see you are willing to break yours down. Happy New Year Laurie.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-75987521852474087142011-12-29T02:43:21.488-06:002011-12-29T02:43:21.488-06:00Like others I also loved this, particularly the li...Like others I also loved this, particularly the line <br />"Help my resolution give birth to brighter days"<br /><br />But I couldn't help feeling that TNT was a little too strong for the gentle work done by a butterfly.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08136225187552117043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62456368474238201512011-12-28T23:19:42.567-06:002011-12-28T23:19:42.567-06:00This is beautiful. Such lovely imagery. Thanks for...This is beautiful. Such lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.Denise Moncriefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06793221574604284282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72471226737791807902011-12-28T22:21:52.132-06:002011-12-28T22:21:52.132-06:00A beautiful resolution.
An outstanding line:
&quo...A beautiful resolution.<br /><br />An outstanding line:<br />"Breaking free from dormancy"The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-42550381940756371842011-12-28T22:04:54.386-06:002011-12-28T22:04:54.386-06:00so well done with these 3 words..thanks for sharin...so well done with these 3 words..thanks for sharing LaurieWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-12753272694407142972011-12-28T19:11:26.006-06:002011-12-28T19:11:26.006-06:00Laurie, you've written this poem honesty and p...Laurie, you've written this poem honesty and pretty. it does become tiresome protecting one's heart and<br />to what end?Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-7611882197100446482011-12-28T15:26:44.378-06:002011-12-28T15:26:44.378-06:00I'm with Sherry - those are the words that tug...I'm with Sherry - those are the words that tugged my heartstrings also:<br />"I'm sure there must be someone <br />Who won't leave<br />Or die"<br />Lovely poem and all inspired by just 3 words ... niceS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-61011991461093322102011-12-28T15:14:08.759-06:002011-12-28T15:14:08.759-06:00truly stirring and beautifully spoken from the hea...truly stirring and beautifully spoken from the heart<br /><br />Happy New YearSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90531089426880026452011-12-28T14:19:02.877-06:002011-12-28T14:19:02.877-06:00Lovely and flowing. The last lines were particula...Lovely and flowing. The last lines were particularly beautiful and evocative.Grandma's Goulashhttp://www.grandmas-goulash.infonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5106131259892793152011-12-28T13:59:22.053-06:002011-12-28T13:59:22.053-06:00This was a truly beautiful piece of writing.This was a truly beautiful piece of writing.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-26216186425206298502011-12-28T12:58:01.410-06:002011-12-28T12:58:01.410-06:00Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. ...Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I hope you have a blessed 2012!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72547456421248598642011-12-28T12:06:55.238-06:002011-12-28T12:06:55.238-06:00That last stanza is lovely!That last stanza is lovely!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-79603056317806509132011-12-28T11:07:35.911-06:002011-12-28T11:07:35.911-06:00So beautifully written! I especially relate to &qu...So beautifully written! I especially relate to "surely there must be someone who wont leave or die", and the wish for the walls to come down gently. For that, perhaps something other than TNT:-)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77659156820307324322011-12-28T10:48:29.512-06:002011-12-28T10:48:29.512-06:00A wonderful resolution, and a beautiful poem. Ver...A wonderful resolution, and a beautiful poem. Very nice.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-56049416829205099282011-12-28T09:27:37.931-06:002011-12-28T09:27:37.931-06:00Beautifully put.Beautifully put.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-74583285416990837052011-12-28T09:20:16.187-06:002011-12-28T09:20:16.187-06:00Laurie, this is gorgeous writing.Laurie, this is gorgeous writing.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2011/12/28/hell-hath-no-fury/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91411755949171789772011-12-28T09:04:16.125-06:002011-12-28T09:04:16.125-06:00"But let the transformation be
As gentle as a..."But let the transformation be<br />As gentle as a butterfly..." --<br />I like that image very much indeed.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com