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Monday, April 11, 2011

Magpie Tales Monday



Her Only Hope


Judging eyes bargain:
to see the truth at last
awaken, step out;
a quantum leap
from fish to fledgling.
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    I love it! Keep it up!

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  2. anthonynorthApril 11, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Deceptively deep words. Excellent.

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  3. Isabel DoyleApril 11, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    that would be a leap ...

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  4. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 11:05 AM

    This concise in works, expansive in thought.

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  5. Brother OllieApril 11, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    "quantum leap" - always

    nice tight poem

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  6. JinksyApril 11, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    Fish to fledgling is more than a leap - it's a miracle! LOL

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  7. Emily YoungApril 11, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Love it! I hope she makes the leap...

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  8. MartinApril 11, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    Something evolutionary going on here.

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  9. izzyApril 11, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    Nice ! thanks for visiting-

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  10. Other MaryApril 11, 2011 at 5:00 PM

    From fish to fledgling - unexpected, and that of course is good!

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  11. AnonymousApril 11, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    The truth will set you free. I liked your artful take on this concept. Am I to assume the wine facilitated the process? vb

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  12. Laurie KolpApril 11, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    Escalated it, really.

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  13. Tumblewords:April 11, 2011 at 11:52 PM

    I love quantum leaping - it speaks to momentous events. :) Perfect!!

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  14. ReflectionsApril 12, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Concise, yet thought provoking... nicely done.

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  15. TrellissimoApril 15, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    In vino veritas?

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  16. Laurie KolpApril 15, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    Yes... 'in wine, truth' (had to look it up).

    = )

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  17. Vinay Leo R.April 16, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    beautifully versed and thought provoking! :)

    My Magpie Post

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