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Wednesday, May 18, 2011

3 Word Wednesday

Psyche, You’re It

Incensed nonsense,
insane thoughts s - k - i - d
like a child’s muddy shoes--
dampened recesses
of a troubled mind.

@laurie kolp
 
3WW: skid, incensed, damp
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13 comments:

  1. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsMay 18, 2011 at 7:21 AM

    Love the child simile! Adds a kind of wild abandon! Great little poem!

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  2. anthonynorthMay 18, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Love the way you describe the troubled mind here.

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  3. Jae RoseMay 18, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    I felt much complexity here..children's rhymes..but oh-so grown up feelings..Jae

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  4. Sheilagh LeeMay 18, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    love that you can still feel like a child.

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  5. Jess PJMay 18, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    the title is quite fun, goes well

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  6. Nara MaloneMay 18, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    I like the idea of thoughts skidding like a child's muddy shoes, could see that image. Great take on the prompt.

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  7. Laurie KolpMay 18, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    Thanks for your kind comments!

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  8. trishaMay 19, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    short, beautiful and vividly descriptive.

    loved it. :)

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/incensed-for-3ww/

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  9. tarunimaMay 19, 2011 at 2:57 AM

    so much can be said in a few words!:)
    loved it:)

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  10. AnonymousMay 19, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    Well penned, Laurie. Light and thoughtful.

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  11. rmpWritingsMay 20, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    simple and yet it holds so much. being filled with skidding insane thoughts, I can relate.

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  12. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    Really good job I love how you used the words

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  13. AnonymousMay 23, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    Light in style, deep in content! Love it.

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