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| Moevs, Marina River |
Pick-up sticks on the river bank
reveal chaos amidst a reflective odyssey
left behind, the jumbled wreckage remains
untouched the course in life has changed
as the past fades into a distant mirage
allowing room for a peaceful future.
@laurie kolp
Picture inspiration: Magpie Tales
aros, Day 2
A two-week holiday, the kids rise early with anticipation;
back to school on Monday, the kids want to hibernate.
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a thought of a room for peaceful future is wonderful...
ReplyDeletenice!
Happy New Year!
JJRod'z
Lovely words and photo!
ReplyDeleteYou had me at "pick-up sticks"!
ReplyDeleteDeep and beautifully done.
ReplyDeletelove the picture - and you have captured it and enlivened it well here - great, great write here Laurie!
ReplyDeleteLovely! I'm so looking forward to a peaceful future.
ReplyDeletebless you,
ReplyDeletehave a lovely tomorrow.
fantastic sentiments, great magpie.
uplifting and positive- Happy New Year!
ReplyDeletepretty image :)
ReplyDeleteSimply and so deeply reflecting the truth of life. Love and peace will always find their way.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
you got me with 'pick up sticks'!! beautiful words..x
ReplyDeletewe drift in life, what we remember and use gives us the peace to continue, lovely positive Magpie
ReplyDeleteAah, a lovely optimistic view. : )
ReplyDeleteThis reads like a swiftly flowing river, Laurie... it reads like life.
ReplyDeleteI love the chaos in the calm........
ReplyDeleteBut is there "room for a peaceful future"? Let us hope...
ReplyDeleteEver so gently and naturally
ReplyDeleteyou cajole and steer us past
the eddy of a new year, the
cusp of the past being shed
like snake skin, and point
our focus into the brilliant
light of the path ahead;
good read, Laurie.
Fantastic! Love both of them :)
ReplyDeletegorgeous magpie tale Laurie...I need to check out stone one now:-)
ReplyDeleteI look forward to the peaceful future...so glad the past fades.
ReplyDeleteAh.. a peaceful future. Wishing you a most peaceful New Year! Lovely Magpie.
ReplyDeleteI adore the beginning! And I agree, if we let the past fade (the unpleasant stuff), the future will be much happier.
ReplyDeleteI love how you show the entire scope of experience..I'm swept away!!
ReplyDeletenice...pick up sticks is the perfect descriptor for this....and life does move on...as a kid we found several old places abandoned we would explore...
ReplyDeleteI echo Brian's comment ... pick up sticks is so appropriate!
ReplyDeleteYou have made excellent use of the wrecked shed. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletePeaceful future! that is what we need thanks-
ReplyDeleteI want to be with the kids and hibernate. :-)
ReplyDeletechaos is good...so is calm..and all inbetween.....nicely done Laurie
ReplyDeletei love the peaceful future...thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeletePick up sticks - great imagery!
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