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Sunday, March 4, 2012

Imagination Catching Wind



The woolly bear caterpillar caught her unaware
in the white kitchen, metal crashed
a scream with the fullness of a stuck pig
resonated through the neighborhood.
When I returned from my daily walk
my coatless daughter waited outside
with a warning that I shouldn’t enter.
Admonishing her Miss Muffet-ness
and with shoulders back and standing tall
I marched right in just like a penguin,
her shadow followed on my tail
wind the remnants of despair
this fake eyebrow remnant
disguised.
Part of an image by Sarolta Ban

@laurie kolp

Prompt inspirations:
(coatless, white, metal, shadow, kitchen,
returned, prefers, unaware, admonish,
fullness, daughter, woolly)
&
 The Mag

45 comments:

  1. I can so see myself in this! I am such a baby when it comes to creepy crawlies of all kinds. A well put together wordle!

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  2. This brought a smile to my face. I can remember my own fear of many of Gods smaller creatures. That disappeared with children and age. I learned I had to be the brave one. And while I can deal with penny size bugs, I still have an issue with spiders and anything larger than a quarter. Maybe I ought to have a sign on all points of entry...no bugs allowed.

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  3. hee hee! LIKE! This is awesome, Laurie. You brought the scene to life, and I love "a scream with the fullness of a stuck pig..."

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  4. I love this - such a different take from what occurred to me ... esp the woolly caterpillar and the whole fairytale feel to it ... nicely done.

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  5. I love the way this one sounds: hard, brittle, click-clack, strong. Another impressive piece, Laurie. Loved the caterpillar. :)

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  6. I love the way this one sounds: hard, brittle, click-clack, strong. Another impressive piece, Laurie. Loved the caterpillar. :)

    ~Shawna
    rosemarymint.wordpress.com

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  7. smiles....this has a rather alice in wonderland surreal-ness to it...the way you used words def accentuate that feel...

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  8. I love all the different directions people go with these wordles!! And what a delightful slice of life you have painted here. I always enjoy your blog.

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  9. Just act brave and pray the child doesn't notice how scared you actually are! :-) Very true!

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  10. Enjoyed the scene,not sure I made the Mag connection but that's ok!
    thank-

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  11. Love, LOVE that you did the eyebrow!!!!!!! :)

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  12. What a creative take on the picture...I am scared of caterpillars too ~ But I had to laugh at the fake eyebrow remnant disguised :-)

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  13. I loved to play with wooly worms when I was a child! Who thought they would make a good eyebrow? Your words are so imaginative.

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  14. Way better eye beautification tips here than Maybelline offers up. I loved the turning of events through out, including the attitudinal input from the teenager. Well done,Laurie. Thanks.

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  15. I loved picturing you walking in like a penguin!! Quite a picture!

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  16. Hi Laurie! I love your first line "The woolly bear caterpillar caught her unaware
    in the white kitchen".

    I think woolly is one of my new favorite words now. Lol!

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  17. I loved "Miss Muffet-ness" and "this fake eyebrow remnant." You've used the words well!

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  18. loved your take on this! :) if i had read this before i started working on mine, i am sure it would have had a major influence on mine..

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  19. thanks!

    Wander

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com

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  20. I have to admit that I needed to read this several times to make sense of it... But that is in no way a bad thing, rather that my mind is not cultural enough at this time on a Monday! Nice write!

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  21. Such a clever take - love it!

    Anna :o]

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  22. LOL, love it. My daughter that used to collect every creature she could find has just crossed over to 'aahhhh! There is an ant on the couch!" Pre-teen here we come.

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  23. Eeck!
    This was very mystically creative -- love it Laurie. Your take on the photo is great!

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  24. Well thought-out little story - thanks.

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  25. That is one big caterpillar..I love this modern nursery rhyme..frying pans are great for shooing big bugs! jae

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  26. hahaha - that's one helluva' eyebrow! Good one!

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  27. Brilliant- those eyebrows did look fake, but I never thought of a caterpillar! LOL

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  28. Guess your character would not have been too happy at my home a few summers ago - my son and I rescued a few monarch eggs, and caterpillars - fed them and watched them grow in a butterfly house! But then I can deal with most buggies. :)

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  29. Great story, and a very creative take on the Mag prompt. Well done, Laurie, and thank you!

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  30. Oh, and I like the way you cropped the picture, too...

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  31. now that...I didn't see coming :-)

    interesting bisection of the image, I was absorbed by the whole and you saw a story in a fractional view

    Nicely done

    Peace ☮

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  32. wonderful, Laurie! i had no idea when reading it that so many words were prompt words!

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  33. To focus on the eyebrow must be unique among us taking up the challenge this week. I really enjoyed this.

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  34. Two challenges nailed wonderfully! H-m-m-m, I have a feeling I'll think of you the next time I see a fuzzy-wuzzy black caterpillar:)

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  35. What fun! Love how you used only part of the photo offered. Excellent.

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  36. If this isn't a true story, it should be :)

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