tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post1873498156529830596..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: (Some Things Will Never Be) Passé Composé Laurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-49181823727019824702012-10-01T09:34:59.380-05:002012-10-01T09:34:59.380-05:00Oh how this conjures up some nostalgic feelings. M...Oh how this conjures up some nostalgic feelings. Many of them revolving around waiting by the mailbox for the bus to come.....great writing Laurie...loved it.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-60410536747991590392012-09-30T16:20:50.973-05:002012-09-30T16:20:50.973-05:00Definitely a different take! I like it.Definitely a different take! I like it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70224813630411818052012-09-30T15:28:38.419-05:002012-09-30T15:28:38.419-05:00Oh, this aching emptiness...Laurie, you always bri...Oh, this aching emptiness...Laurie, you always bring a chill with your words...emotively striking...I've missed you as well my friend! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-17683464454721390902012-09-30T13:44:06.723-05:002012-09-30T13:44:06.723-05:00What would life be without letters?What would life be without letters?Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-66975451130341944372012-09-30T13:02:17.999-05:002012-09-30T13:02:17.999-05:00I really like this:
"Yet one stands with flap...I really like this:<br />"Yet one stands with flap open<br />unwilling to wander away"<br /><br />And the image of the child walking down the road at the end. :)flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70000847473137352552012-09-30T12:27:52.421-05:002012-09-30T12:27:52.421-05:00Love the "come back to me" - a parents&#...Love the "come back to me" - a parents' refrain.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70468594618809855052012-09-30T10:55:32.264-05:002012-09-30T10:55:32.264-05:00aw, yesterday's letters, tomorrow's goodby...aw, yesterday's letters, tomorrow's goodbyes.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-99914298578763872012-09-30T10:14:09.108-05:002012-09-30T10:14:09.108-05:00smiles....nice...like the SENTiments and the paren...smiles....nice...like the SENTiments and the parent waving there in the end is a powerful visual to end on....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84857569701381168642012-09-30T08:40:00.271-05:002012-09-30T08:40:00.271-05:00That last stanza was specially piercing for me ~ ...That last stanza was specially piercing for me ~ Nice one Laurie ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25762824272711957672012-09-30T06:44:04.156-05:002012-09-30T06:44:04.156-05:00This one is really beautiful ... I loved the memor...This one is really beautiful ... I loved the memories associated with it :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-24156662961718147322012-09-30T04:38:19.926-05:002012-09-30T04:38:19.926-05:00Quite unique imagery.Quite unique imagery.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-88390458369721138042012-09-30T03:58:08.744-05:002012-09-30T03:58:08.744-05:00I liked the image you created in the last stanza -...I liked the image you created in the last stanza - I could just see myself being that parent!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-50982004141972002952012-09-30T01:52:10.943-05:002012-09-30T01:52:10.943-05:00Your well placed analogy was a powerful addition t...Your well placed analogy was a powerful addition to your description, and reminded us of the human element which is missing from the scene.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-83615784084765313122012-09-29T22:56:54.755-05:002012-09-29T22:56:54.755-05:00How creative, Laurie! Brings back memories of Fren...How creative, Laurie! Brings back memories of French language classes, verb tense & all!<br /><br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17254228974989688426noreply@blogger.com