tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post1885514337081336624..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: At the Threshold, Part IILaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-15905654759792669502011-06-23T08:26:29.967-05:002011-06-23T08:26:29.967-05:00Don’t slam the door on God..
superb! when somebody...Don’t slam the door on God..<br />superb! when somebody lost their way, you persuade them that whatever our mistake, God still waiting their self realization. the words seemed flow by revelation. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-65988566100636630502011-06-20T17:07:42.246-05:002011-06-20T17:07:42.246-05:00This is very strong work from both of you. I'm...This is very strong work from both of you. I'm impressed by your restraint in the first version, when you don't draw attention to your mirrored thresholds. And your final line, in my reading of it, is as strong as the rest of it.Enchanted Oakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815997287116818456noreply@blogger.com