tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post210669322611939292..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: At the ThresholdLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-72921668450105649612011-06-20T01:09:47.572-05:002011-06-20T01:09:47.572-05:00Another powerful poem.Another powerful poem.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-4642546307459673972011-06-19T22:37:15.017-05:002011-06-19T22:37:15.017-05:00nicely done Laurie....thanks for sharingnicely done Laurie....thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18070734685257661842011-06-18T15:22:01.607-05:002011-06-18T15:22:01.607-05:00Laurie -
I didn't even notice the acrostic un...Laurie -<br /><br />I didn't even notice the acrostic until now...and on both sides!! Well done!!<br /><br />BTW, I'm adding it to my post, with a link and credit back to your site.<br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-78102526098290866242011-06-18T14:02:55.272-05:002011-06-18T14:02:55.272-05:00Very powerful poem, until the last line, which see...Very powerful poem, until the last line, which seems a little weak. It doesn't have the emotion and feeling that the rest of the poem has. <br /><br />You had me from the start, and like Viv, it was quite intimidating. Great writing.gsb3https://www.blogger.com/profile/04959847442265949181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23634159467173641242011-06-18T12:42:29.780-05:002011-06-18T12:42:29.780-05:00Viv- thanks?
Paula- Yes, ours would be great toge...Viv- thanks?<br /><br />Paula- Yes, ours would be great together... glad you like the door visual.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-13454627702925833372011-06-18T11:15:37.097-05:002011-06-18T11:15:37.097-05:00Laurie:
I wrote one haiku, posted it, then proceed...Laurie:<br />I wrote one haiku, posted it, then proceeded to reading others' posts. When I got to yours, a second haiku sprung forth ~ a bit of a response to reading your words. Here's a link: <a href="http://whenwordsescape.wordpress.com/2011/06/18/knocking-at-the-door/" rel="nofollow">Knocking at the Door</a>.<br /><br />By the way....good job on creating a perfect square with your words! I don't know if you intended it to be such, but it seemed rather connected to a "block wall" or slammed door.<br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-80523270027925162722011-06-18T09:43:15.219-05:002011-06-18T09:43:15.219-05:00This one's a bit frightening!This one's a bit frightening!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com