tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post3865570938459053854..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Love's DarknessLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-70923596186472283282011-09-29T01:08:29.900-05:002011-09-29T01:08:29.900-05:00Your homonym keeps the original spirit of the form...Your homonym keeps the original spirit of the form alive. Bravo.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-34543336393677259772011-09-28T12:46:29.962-05:002011-09-28T12:46:29.962-05:00I love the flow, but also the imagines that arrive...I love the flow, but also the imagines that arrive~ Stunning!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5800766266430315812011-09-28T08:32:30.195-05:002011-09-28T08:32:30.195-05:00Very nicely done, finely crafted with lots of laye...Very nicely done, finely crafted with lots of layers to ponder. I liked it a lot!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-26847668174803524432011-09-28T06:11:38.711-05:002011-09-28T06:11:38.711-05:00A fascinating form Laurie! A triolet! May try it!
...A fascinating form Laurie! A triolet! May try it!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-669747842266285382011-09-27T23:41:34.376-05:002011-09-27T23:41:34.376-05:00Loved "the blues" in this, Laurie. I wi...Loved "the blues" in this, Laurie. I will never understand forms, but I'm sure you locked this is correctly... <br /><br />"like fighting Sioux," really a stunning line. Thanks! Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/portrait-of-great-grandpa-and-mom/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-8954400509675114272011-09-27T21:55:15.428-05:002011-09-27T21:55:15.428-05:00Wow! Loves darkness...what a great title for a gre...Wow! Loves darkness...what a great title for a great poem!ShonEjaihttp://www.picture-speak.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-20080033486769744842011-09-27T21:26:54.897-05:002011-09-27T21:26:54.897-05:00Bravo, Laurie. Excellent triolet! I love the fo...Bravo, Laurie. Excellent triolet! I love the form.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51131108695893040022011-09-27T16:12:21.785-05:002011-09-27T16:12:21.785-05:00Yes... there's a transformation in this.Yes... there's a transformation in this.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51464056972795293382011-09-27T15:25:37.162-05:002011-09-27T15:25:37.162-05:00An intriguing poem on several levels. The dark sid...An intriguing poem on several levels. The dark side of love Eva saw was concealed by the Knight I saw as goodness and honor in the first reading. Great trioletMike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-27888485275036776352011-09-27T14:47:12.961-05:002011-09-27T14:47:12.961-05:00Call me weird, but this somehow brings to my mind ...Call me weird, but this somehow brings to my mind domestic violence--the dark side of "love."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36737538211576263692011-09-27T13:39:18.807-05:002011-09-27T13:39:18.807-05:00Oh this is very good.. I like the subtle changes i...Oh this is very good.. I like the subtle changes in the repeated line, and I can't remember the word Sioux being used in quite so innovative a way before. Lovely triolet.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91304665601691306112011-09-27T13:38:04.203-05:002011-09-27T13:38:04.203-05:00this is such a wonderfully circular piece. i reall...this is such a wonderfully circular piece. i really like the blue color tucked into the night.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52727942891842488322011-09-27T13:16:04.993-05:002011-09-27T13:16:04.993-05:00The knight and night make a great duo in this fun ...The knight and night make a great duo in this fun triolet. I enjoyed it...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com