tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post4313377569920456622..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: SlickLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-950289669804353522012-12-05T07:57:07.178-06:002012-12-05T07:57:07.178-06:00Great take on how one can miss the effects of thei...Great take on how one can miss the effects of their own ego!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-30079944197341233142012-11-29T18:46:06.299-06:002012-11-29T18:46:06.299-06:00It had seen better days. So it deserved the indign...It had seen better days. So it deserved the indignity? Perhaps! Nicely Laurie!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-33714265125015596532012-11-29T18:14:38.504-06:002012-11-29T18:14:38.504-06:00wonderful - 'defeat' strikes a strong note...wonderful - 'defeat' strikes a strong note.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-33027975908498038872012-11-28T10:36:12.633-06:002012-11-28T10:36:12.633-06:00You were thinking along the same lines as I was......You were thinking along the same lines as I was...I can relate! Nice write...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-89160053437976739082012-11-28T09:03:25.879-06:002012-11-28T09:03:25.879-06:00Beautiful Laurie.
Anna :o]Beautiful Laurie.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37812461227371125312012-11-27T20:53:12.121-06:002012-11-27T20:53:12.121-06:00nice one Laurie....beautiful for surenice one Laurie....beautiful for sureWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-29060198102592459432012-11-27T11:34:32.267-06:002012-11-27T11:34:32.267-06:00Deep and beautiful Laurie! :-)Deep and beautiful Laurie! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90869955031708110612012-11-26T20:09:55.171-06:002012-11-26T20:09:55.171-06:00This was absolutely a gorgeous read, dripping with...This was absolutely a gorgeous read, dripping with melancholy.ninothttp://lapoesieparninotaziz.blogspot.com/2012/11/moonlight.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-66346426001504870932012-11-26T10:37:22.261-06:002012-11-26T10:37:22.261-06:00That was beautifully written and sad. You have su...That was beautifully written and sad. You have such a talent, Laurie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-75955310070403238262012-11-26T10:06:28.036-06:002012-11-26T10:06:28.036-06:00Ego ~ often a huge stumbling block to satisfying r...Ego ~ often a huge stumbling block to satisfying relationships. Nice job, Laurie!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-4834371046449393302012-11-26T06:21:42.519-06:002012-11-26T06:21:42.519-06:00..to sit alone in other's eyes... What a sad l.....to sit alone in other's eyes... What a sad line to read... Short but delivering.<br /><br />kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-52853199994942656852012-11-26T05:16:23.391-06:002012-11-26T05:16:23.391-06:00Very moving. Sad, but punches well above its weigh...Very moving. Sad, but punches well above its weight, poetically speaking.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38598305685540498762012-11-26T01:13:06.605-06:002012-11-26T01:13:06.605-06:00Supremely sad and angry. Much said with very litt...Supremely sad and angry. Much said with very little.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46549470021450701112012-11-25T20:09:54.896-06:002012-11-25T20:09:54.896-06:00packed with anger..wonderfully expressed..packed with anger..wonderfully expressed..Rashmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294504967496661652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-13626984184641350272012-11-25T20:03:28.987-06:002012-11-25T20:03:28.987-06:00Oh I like the sound of your words reaching to his ...Oh I like the sound of your words reaching to his farewell!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-2861464497864057702012-11-25T19:29:45.071-06:002012-11-25T19:29:45.071-06:00Wow, a lot said in few words. I liked the thought ...Wow, a lot said in few words. I liked the thought of someone's ego being their demise,leaving them separate and alone. But one should never have to sweep beneath anyone's feet and watch life crumble away. Great use of metaphor, Laurie. I liked this a lot.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-6525645150283565512012-11-25T19:27:49.746-06:002012-11-25T19:27:49.746-06:00I enjoyed the two personas you have created here, ...I enjoyed the two personas you have created here, Laurie. The eventual clash is evident. Well conceived and I thank you for sharing. =DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-56415059934903615862012-11-25T15:21:48.900-06:002012-11-25T15:21:48.900-06:00Short and brisk-with rhyme! I like it thanks-Short and brisk-with rhyme! I like it thanks-izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43975251123980067562012-11-25T14:57:40.518-06:002012-11-25T14:57:40.518-06:00Liked this a bunch Laurie--you always create a gre...Liked this a bunch Laurie--you always create a great sense of mood in your pieces--lovely sense of the mood here--although crumbling life--ouchAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84756977601082013972012-11-25T14:53:11.194-06:002012-11-25T14:53:11.194-06:00Valse triste...Valse triste...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-9531520189445761052012-11-25T13:31:56.088-06:002012-11-25T13:31:56.088-06:00Crumbling life? Oo, nasty! Crumbling life? Oo, nasty! Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-56917151895847704722012-11-25T11:08:44.552-06:002012-11-25T11:08:44.552-06:00Very well saidVery well saidGailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-87044211153595805442012-11-25T11:06:58.581-06:002012-11-25T11:06:58.581-06:00Beautifully done.Beautifully done.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-73825946593141134382012-11-25T11:03:01.898-06:002012-11-25T11:03:01.898-06:00I wonder if he lifted his feet while you swept? We...I wonder if he lifted his feet while you swept? Well done!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84126043635377800062012-11-25T10:14:39.839-06:002012-11-25T10:14:39.839-06:00nice...ego will often lead to crumbling....i feel ...nice...ego will often lead to crumbling....i feel a bit sad for those left behind to pick up the piece while the one sits oblivious on the throne...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com