tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post4862420577479718533..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Writer's IslandLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-49441868398371431772011-05-24T00:36:23.278-05:002011-05-24T00:36:23.278-05:00Oh, man, I know that other mom, the buzzkill who c...Oh, man, I know that other mom, the buzzkill who chills the air...! Good work, Laurie! Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/23/summer-sizzle/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5669294614027988662011-05-23T13:31:52.062-05:002011-05-23T13:31:52.062-05:00I love the idea of kids spreading like wildfires. ...I love the idea of kids spreading like wildfires. A happy poem. Thank you.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-89797180369833874982011-05-23T08:56:52.414-05:002011-05-23T08:56:52.414-05:00Some very tasty lines in this one.Some very tasty lines in this one.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77430189003854802732011-05-22T20:27:35.902-05:002011-05-22T20:27:35.902-05:00EF and MEL MARTINEZ XX
Check IRONICUS MAXIMUS.EF and MEL MARTINEZ XX<br />Check IRONICUS MAXIMUS.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-78917001487806113562011-05-22T12:25:08.437-05:002011-05-22T12:25:08.437-05:00Love this, Laurie. I think we all know a mom like ...Love this, Laurie. I think we all know a mom like that, unfortunately!De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-2153547428670119652011-05-22T03:52:20.042-05:002011-05-22T03:52:20.042-05:00wonderful wording..wonderful wording..AMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10104600174286589032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-81445725371381210302011-05-21T23:28:43.510-05:002011-05-21T23:28:43.510-05:00nicely done Laurie.....thanks for sharing your wor...nicely done Laurie.....thanks for sharing your wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-43404275475917167262011-05-21T12:20:09.211-05:002011-05-21T12:20:09.211-05:00Love the line "her skin pancakes on the gridd...Love the line "her skin pancakes on the griddle." Great imagery!E. Johnsonhttp://dandeliondigest.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77630067051024154512011-05-21T09:49:43.953-05:002011-05-21T09:49:43.953-05:00Thanks... and you are right, Mary.Thanks... and you are right, Mary.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-81816083849044637032011-05-21T09:31:56.233-05:002011-05-21T09:31:56.233-05:00I like what you did with this prompt, but even tho...I like what you did with this prompt, but even though the one mom showed up and chilled the sizzling sun she doesn't sound like a very welcome presence to me.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-76525759192108578142011-05-21T09:31:34.926-05:002011-05-21T09:31:34.926-05:00That sizzling Texas sun, I love this one@That sizzling Texas sun, I love this one@annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.com