tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post5028309358263062880..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: Two Points of ViewLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-67814054857034741292013-01-21T13:24:12.886-06:002013-01-21T13:24:12.886-06:00Gave me chills!Gave me chills!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-31221975085976696212013-01-21T04:53:08.507-06:002013-01-21T04:53:08.507-06:00I loved the first...and the second! Frightening an...I loved the first...and the second! Frightening and powerful, both.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59896238036008312432013-01-21T01:00:13.930-06:002013-01-21T01:00:13.930-06:00Goodness...I can hear the snake hiss. I am fascina...Goodness...I can hear the snake hiss. I am fascinated with snakes. They are amazing creatures.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-80465160092823644002013-01-20T19:47:08.129-06:002013-01-20T19:47:08.129-06:00This is good, Laurie. I can really feel the vilen...This is good, Laurie. I can really feel the vileness of this serpent. Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-81713734599664157752013-01-20T18:30:34.440-06:002013-01-20T18:30:34.440-06:00Loved it! Great job putting yourself in the mind o...Loved it! Great job putting yourself in the mind of the serpent :)Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16721358814229182218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37155583632525885482013-01-20T14:54:58.236-06:002013-01-20T14:54:58.236-06:00Lovely offering Laurie ~ I must say the second wa...Lovely offering Laurie ~ I must say the second was a stronger voice, with sounds, like go ahead and make my day ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84012068714252403182013-01-20T13:32:13.007-06:002013-01-20T13:32:13.007-06:00ha. i rather like the second...def sounds like one...ha. i rather like the second...def sounds like one i would not want to messsssss with...ssssmilesssss....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-71974009765937757422013-01-20T12:51:45.223-06:002013-01-20T12:51:45.223-06:00A hissing poem indeed, one of the two things that ...A hissing poem indeed, one of the two things that really scare me.ScottlBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09147326078011352857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38530933048552059132013-01-20T12:36:05.015-06:002013-01-20T12:36:05.015-06:00I enjoyed the first Laurie, and thought, as I'...I enjoyed the first Laurie, and thought, as I'd commented on it before that the language you used brought a definite snake-like-tone with the added bonus of causing me to search out more about the disease you mention which a close friend of mine has. Your second one definitely takes on the POV and you draw your reader in very effectively with a super tense situation. <br /><br />Written well, both of them...I'm glad you included the first again...I stated this before but I said that we need to respect the muse. <br /><br />Warm smiles to you~HannahHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84879387589218303682013-01-20T12:04:29.989-06:002013-01-20T12:04:29.989-06:00Prompt shmomt! A poem is... And you did a great jo...Prompt shmomt! A poem is... And you did a great job, here.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.com