tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post6591213104238217410..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: No Looking BackLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59118262886477825092012-07-12T11:15:30.719-05:002012-07-12T11:15:30.719-05:00It's a dark, moody picture, eh? I did the same...It's a dark, moody picture, eh? I did the same one. Your take is very good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-225888588044287572012-07-09T08:17:08.191-05:002012-07-09T08:17:08.191-05:00Once you wrote it, I could see it too! Great inter...Once you wrote it, I could see it too! Great interpretation!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-28214354340283124042012-07-07T09:49:40.983-05:002012-07-07T09:49:40.983-05:00The vortex is no fun ride! So many ask for anothe...The vortex is no fun ride! So many ask for another ride, though. Moving on is a much better option.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18083293247368952992012-07-07T06:34:44.516-05:002012-07-07T06:34:44.516-05:00a powerful piece so well written! and after all th...a powerful piece so well written! and after all that, moving forward on her own seems a wise choice! it goes so well with the painting, Laurie! wonderful!<br /><br />♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-1927205504487262712012-07-06T21:39:34.530-05:002012-07-06T21:39:34.530-05:00"Unfolding, in front of her eyes
a web of dec..."Unfolding, in front of her eyes<br />a web of deceit,<br />a maelstrom of lies."<br /><br /><br />Oh, this is one of the worst things to witness...You've captured so well the array of emotions involved with this sort of madness. Well done, Laurie!! :)Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-33683141529762573502012-07-06T17:42:07.745-05:002012-07-06T17:42:07.745-05:00Wonderful interpretation for the prompt and I like...Wonderful interpretation for the prompt and I like the painting you put with it--they go very well together. And yes, moving on is a good thing in such cases.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-22943195269450423382012-07-06T15:48:18.562-05:002012-07-06T15:48:18.562-05:00sometimes we just have to walk away, yes... & ...sometimes we just have to walk away, yes... & you chose the perfect painting to accompany your wordsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59807520504666738862012-07-06T11:49:27.663-05:002012-07-06T11:49:27.663-05:00I like this. Forgiveness does not mean that every...I like this. Forgiveness does not mean that everything returns to "normal"! It is a belly softening (cf Levine)--but not necessarily a staying in the zone. Once we soften our bellies via forgiveness, walking away is even easier.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-42804956591408124882012-07-06T07:02:04.697-05:002012-07-06T07:02:04.697-05:00If all he did was cheat and lie, I'm glad she ...If all he did was cheat and lie, I'm glad she moved on without him.<br />Powerful, poetic write Laurie.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18547956135366978942012-07-06T06:07:54.099-05:002012-07-06T06:07:54.099-05:00I too saw eyes when I first looked at it. "a ...I too saw eyes when I first looked at it. "a maelstrom of lies" works well in this and the end of unforgiving is pure life. <br /><br />Two prompts with one poem, good job Laurie. :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37203510855253570632012-07-06T02:49:37.976-05:002012-07-06T02:49:37.976-05:00An analysis of something almost beyond analysis!An analysis of something almost beyond analysis!Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-73796497965747566982012-07-06T00:34:22.325-05:002012-07-06T00:34:22.325-05:00Well Done! I saw the eyes in this one, too~
I love...Well Done! I saw the eyes in this one, too~<br />I love what you did with the prompt!<br />I could feel the pain in your words~<br />Sometimes parting is sweet, with little sorrow!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-47082638541480748072012-07-05T21:50:23.430-05:002012-07-05T21:50:23.430-05:00This is my favorite line: "Until the vortex e...This is my favorite line: "Until the vortex ended" ... and the maelstrom of lies.rosemary minthttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-5034856640269223042012-07-05T20:50:56.257-05:002012-07-05T20:50:56.257-05:00I like that moving forward, even without forgivene...I like that moving forward, even without forgiveness ~ Nice take on the prompts ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51447209916807917932012-07-05T19:57:21.828-05:002012-07-05T19:57:21.828-05:00and maybe that is what it takes...a clean break an...and maybe that is what it takes...a clean break and a fresh opportunity in life.....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-30581955069948940312012-07-05T19:28:37.891-05:002012-07-05T19:28:37.891-05:00Thank you... I saw eyes with first look, but now I...Thank you... I saw eyes with first look, but now I do see oysters, too.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-9874782715459823762012-07-05T19:05:58.982-05:002012-07-05T19:05:58.982-05:00Great interpretation on the painting! And I compl...Great interpretation on the painting! And I completely relate to that moment when moving on becomes necessary, with or without forgiveness. Very nice!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-63481521811286499762012-07-05T15:50:53.041-05:002012-07-05T15:50:53.041-05:00Good stuff, forgiveness is sometimes possible wher...Good stuff, forgiveness is sometimes possible where forgetting is not.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3946242562225726232012-07-05T14:43:40.733-05:002012-07-05T14:43:40.733-05:00Outstanding! I love your take on the painting.Outstanding! I love your take on the painting.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-32499794238649158282012-07-05T14:20:21.970-05:002012-07-05T14:20:21.970-05:00Laurie,
I like what you saw by looking into that ...Laurie,<br /><br />I like what you saw by looking into that painting. Very obvious, once you had written it down!!!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-91889464585824193272012-07-05T13:12:19.409-05:002012-07-05T13:12:19.409-05:00Laurie, indeed sometimes it is difficult to forgiv...Laurie, indeed sometimes it is difficult to forgive things which were done again and again without remorse. One eventually has to choose one's path and move on without......Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46574265593300422852012-07-05T12:51:19.536-05:002012-07-05T12:51:19.536-05:00WOW! What a GREAT interpretation of the painting.....WOW! What a GREAT interpretation of the painting.....works perfectly - the maelstrom, the deceit......"damage done, nothing left to spend"......and then the moving forward. Awesome writing! To me it looked like a plate of oysters and I hate oysters. I like your version better:)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com