tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post6909105900377692735..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: A Typical Day at the ClubLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-69113740997892634902011-06-17T18:17:01.493-05:002011-06-17T18:17:01.493-05:00The indoor/outdoor dichotomy rings true. It’s funn...The indoor/outdoor dichotomy rings true. It’s funny how something like a wordle can generate that.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-4367751974130958012011-06-16T11:11:37.659-05:002011-06-16T11:11:37.659-05:00Laurie, great imagery. I felt like you've been...Laurie, great imagery. I felt like you've been shadowing me. We just went swimming outdoors because it got warm here, but we often swim indoors at the Y, often passing a yoga class on our way in. You've summed up my summer so far. Thanks.<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36280245415692339272011-06-14T01:25:55.098-05:002011-06-14T01:25:55.098-05:00This one had my mind full of sensual images. That...This one had my mind full of sensual images. That lotus word produced some wonderful poems, and I didn't even use it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-36417015798385665652011-06-13T12:18:48.210-05:002011-06-13T12:18:48.210-05:00Well done, Laurie - both the images presented and ...Well done, Laurie - both the images presented and the lotus-root-like structure of the poem itself. :)Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-54330786848528061462011-06-13T04:30:28.924-05:002011-06-13T04:30:28.924-05:00I loved your description -
"Outside summer’...I loved your description - <br /><br />"Outside summer’s inferno tempts<br /><br />pool-goers. Alluring chestnuts,<br /><br />their torsos roast and burn."<br /><br />I went with lotus position for my wordle too. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-23131306685290886042011-06-12T21:54:40.229-05:002011-06-12T21:54:40.229-05:00Nicely done, Laurie! I had planned a "lotus p...Nicely done, Laurie! I had planned a "lotus position" for my wordle all day...and then when I sat down to write, that's not at all what came out! <br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-35146397150866315502011-06-12T19:57:38.952-05:002011-06-12T19:57:38.952-05:00You have captured well the difference between outs...You have captured well the difference between outside activities and inside activities in summer! Active vs. contemplative/ meditative.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38405922497193538462011-06-12T19:04:11.918-05:002011-06-12T19:04:11.918-05:00Laurie,
A nice feel of relaxation and contemplati...Laurie,<br /><br />A nice feel of relaxation and contemplation....<br /><br />Best wishes, EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-16940720430066640742011-06-12T17:56:24.413-05:002011-06-12T17:56:24.413-05:00You've captured the scene and feeling of pagan...You've captured the scene and feeling of pagan and yoga. Nicely done Laurie.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-15176434508174948522011-06-12T16:06:49.644-05:002011-06-12T16:06:49.644-05:00Yes! This is wonderful, Laurie, and rich with ima...Yes! This is wonderful, Laurie, and rich with imagery. mouths in Os...brenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-62837954408759167902011-06-12T16:05:49.337-05:002011-06-12T16:05:49.337-05:00nicely done Laurie....thanks for sharing your wor...nicely done Laurie....thanks for sharing your wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.com