tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post7593055297676185908..comments2023-11-03T03:59:48.985-05:00Comments on *Laurie Kolp Poetry*: PlayedLaurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38161535047152539002012-10-31T21:28:14.185-05:002012-10-31T21:28:14.185-05:00So very powerful...So very powerful...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-89364006913293796832012-10-31T09:20:45.572-05:002012-10-31T09:20:45.572-05:00Compact piece says so much!Compact piece says so much!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-25268724918055749882012-10-30T22:24:56.337-05:002012-10-30T22:24:56.337-05:00Wow! To create such a wonderful piece and with a w...Wow! To create such a wonderful piece and with a word list! I am impressed!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-60596400188879680082012-10-30T19:41:36.803-05:002012-10-30T19:41:36.803-05:00I am floored you used a word list for this. Just ...I am floored you used a word list for this. Just Wow! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-81934761302605955672012-10-29T16:15:57.051-05:002012-10-29T16:15:57.051-05:00Laurie, beautifully done and I love how you used t...Laurie, beautifully done and I love how you used the web photo--these tangled threads we weave--perfect!Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-18893153750978514002012-10-29T10:14:11.287-05:002012-10-29T10:14:11.287-05:00Wonderful! This has a great flow to it. You real...Wonderful! This has a great flow to it. You really did justice to the form.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-3697076652168925752012-10-29T10:07:14.625-05:002012-10-29T10:07:14.625-05:00ack.ack.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38841163250424970952012-10-29T07:10:22.024-05:002012-10-29T07:10:22.024-05:00Having trouble posting, so hopefully this attempt ...Having trouble posting, so hopefully this attempt will work and you'll know how much I enjoyed reading your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-49336388966500078942012-10-29T06:19:54.615-05:002012-10-29T06:19:54.615-05:00Spectacular. For me it ticks all the boxes.Spectacular. For me it ticks all the boxes.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-37687914254347410462012-10-29T05:47:59.733-05:002012-10-29T05:47:59.733-05:00Oh Laurie this flows so well. Kudos. Love it.Oh Laurie this flows so well. Kudos. Love it.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-84262177387550715032012-10-29T03:51:42.043-05:002012-10-29T03:51:42.043-05:00well done - short and to the point, with more weig...well done - short and to the point, with more weight than it looks to have. I like!Mama Pajamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10278474039105398842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-90090916355205546952012-10-28T22:33:22.399-05:002012-10-28T22:33:22.399-05:00Laurie, like the rhythm in this poem & the
&qu...Laurie, like the rhythm in this poem & the<br />"silent door".Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17254228974989688426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-46409889647498923372012-10-28T21:10:31.990-05:002012-10-28T21:10:31.990-05:00Oh, such good writing...........especially love yo...Oh, such good writing...........especially love your two closing lines.....wowzers!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-66389940592248370802012-10-28T20:36:42.220-05:002012-10-28T20:36:42.220-05:00So intense, Laurie...my reading took me deeper but...So intense, Laurie...my reading took me deeper but I think it's because I just read Brenda's poem...the damaged and unbound is haunting. Great write!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-38915300572156016142012-10-28T15:36:25.766-05:002012-10-28T15:36:25.766-05:00Wonderful response to the prompt, Laurie, especial...Wonderful response to the prompt, Laurie, especially the last two lines. I struggled with the form, but you have nailed it with skill and power.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-8892795985459072052012-10-28T14:30:27.081-05:002012-10-28T14:30:27.081-05:00The words fit in so powerfully ... loved it !!!The words fit in so powerfully ... loved it !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-73584208791465402292012-10-28T13:43:47.631-05:002012-10-28T13:43:47.631-05:00Laurie, perfectly concise use of the words in this...Laurie, perfectly concise use of the words in this poem. Well done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-60781170688948777412012-10-28T13:11:35.962-05:002012-10-28T13:11:35.962-05:00"bound, damaged, then unbound" sounds li..."bound, damaged, then unbound" sounds like my first marriage and subsequent divorce!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03803472040500529682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-51444755463827873252012-10-28T12:38:51.472-05:002012-10-28T12:38:51.472-05:00Very well thought out and constructed. Concise and...Very well thought out and constructed. Concise and packed with wisdom,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/10/28/a-list-poem-about-why/Elizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2012/10/28/a-list-poem-about-why/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-59385416616917518002012-10-28T12:38:48.063-05:002012-10-28T12:38:48.063-05:00WOW! The way you were able to weave the prompts ~...WOW! The way you were able to weave the prompts ~ awesome!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-22099362207868768632012-10-28T12:31:52.292-05:002012-10-28T12:31:52.292-05:00Very intense, really packs a punch and the ending ...Very intense, really packs a punch and the ending is perfect.rchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390033530066470195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-74429977109550465822012-10-28T11:47:43.718-05:002012-10-28T11:47:43.718-05:00
The poor spider! What part in this symbolism doe...<br />The poor spider! What part in this symbolism does she have to play? The played or the player?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-48660329407924749152012-10-28T11:26:41.844-05:002012-10-28T11:26:41.844-05:00I'm so impressed how you were able to work all...I'm so impressed how you were able to work all the words into the 7 lines! I really like the idea of damaged, then unwound.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-77756671634883928592012-10-28T11:22:33.322-05:002012-10-28T11:22:33.322-05:00Using all those given words and ina demanding form...Using all those given words and ina demanding format no less. Well done.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4891118331658959226.post-55071875804240773172012-10-28T11:17:53.683-05:002012-10-28T11:17:53.683-05:00Damaged, and then unwound. Fabulous.Damaged, and then unwound. Fabulous.nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.com