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Thursday, June 16, 2011

Barriers: A Tanka



One brick at a time
I watched you slipping away
Through the underbrush--
Your herculean wall block
My dynamite will knock down.


@laurie kolp
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7 comments:

  1. Steve IsaakJune 16, 2011 at 8:23 PM

    Good, direct write.

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  2. sweet pea.June 16, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    ooh.
    sounds menacing, almost.

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  3. UnknownJune 16, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    Powerful write:-)

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  4. annell4June 17, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    I like what you did with the brick! And thanks for coming to my new site.

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  5. KarenJune 17, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Whoa! Very primal. I read it three times, getting a different visual each time. Wonderful!

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  6. AnonymousJune 19, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    great knitting of words ~~

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  7. Madeleine Begun KaneJune 20, 2011 at 1:05 AM

    I liked that a lot. Wonderful tanka!

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