They met at the bistro for a tête-à-tête
a quiet corner within an alcove.
At first glance, you'd think them lovers
hands knotted, bodies interwove.
Until a fumble occured
wine splashed polka-dots everywhere
wild banter ensued from the couple
who scattered without time to spare.
Prompt inspiration: 3WW (banter, fumble, glance)
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Unattached or completely removed from the scene..not telling certainly leaves a bigger story..a bigger question in my head..a shot..maybe..Jae
ReplyDeleteA good spill will do it every time!
ReplyDeleteAdorable. I can really imagine
ReplyDeletethis scene.
makes wonder why they split so quickly
ReplyDeleteYeah, surely a little spill wasn't enough to split them up.
ReplyDeleteI think I was sitting at a table nearby, you did that so well.
ReplyDeleteI get the feeling there's a bigger story here.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of three words. Please come see my three words
I think that there's more to this story, too!
ReplyDeleteI really thought the wine spatters were metaphor. Now I want to know more.
ReplyDeleteI think it was his inappropriate fumble that caused her to spill the wine and end the evening quickly. Great picture you have drawn here.
ReplyDeleteWonderful description.
ReplyDeleteA great description of a minor catastrophe. Did you mean tumble?
ReplyDeleteIf so, where's fumble? Or am I nit-picking?
I agree with oldegg, nice one.
ReplyDeleteNice use of the words.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful description of the scene; I could definitely see it.
Nice little story with a hint of mystery.
ReplyDeletePamela