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Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Just Go With It

Why let indecision in your mind titillate
the need for precision obscuring one’s fate?
An angry swarm of bees buzzing through self-doubt;
the devil’s obstacle, not an option for debate.  


@laurie kolp


Prompt Inspirations:

3WW- indecision, option, fate

Poetic Asides- sound
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12 comments:

  1. Jae RoseJuly 13, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    Seeds of doubt do sometimes seem to be sown by darker forces..I like how the words match the message..clipped and clear..Jae

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  2. Linda JacobsJuly 13, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    Love the bees buzzing through self doubt!

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  3. DaydreamertooJuly 13, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    Yes, whatever we decide, was always going to be whatever we decided, and you said it so eloquently.

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  4. Sheilagh LeeJuly 13, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    this was very eloquent and succinct.

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  5. AngelJuly 13, 2011 at 1:21 PM

    Love the sentiment behind this one.

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  6. AnonymousJuly 13, 2011 at 1:24 PM

    Fantastic!

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  7. AltonianJuly 13, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    A big point made, using few words to do it. Well done!

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  8. LolamouseJuly 13, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    If they only made Raid for getting rid of those buzzing bees in the mind!

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  9. MaryJuly 13, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    Why indeed? Why indeed

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  10. Kwee Cats and ArtJuly 14, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    I love your angry-bee description of self-doubt, indecision.

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  11. UnknownJuly 14, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    You've aptly identified the devils' wiles, Laurie!

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  12. Laurie KolpJuly 14, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    Thanks!

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