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Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Early Morning Delight

The aromatic air led me to this place;
percolating coffee, cinnamon, vanilla
swirled into tantalizing tastes I admire.

You ordered a piece of apple strudel
while I puckered up my lips, painted them red
hoping you'd follow me back to the hotel.

@laurie kolp

Poetic inspiration: 3WW (admire, follow, piece), Poets United Midnight Snack
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20 comments:

  1. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 12, 2011 at 8:31 AM

    the last line makes one think.

    cool one.

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  2. Bethe77October 12, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    Smiling! Love the apple strudel.
    But pucker lips painted that is a great line.
    Blessings

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  3. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    oooh...a little naughty! I like it!

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  4. DeborahOctober 12, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Oooh ... that was deliciously written!

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  5. anthonynorthOctober 12, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    Great last line. Always leave the reader with something to ponder, I say.

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  6. Janet MartinOctober 12, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    I LOVE the eye-brow raising twist at the end! Perfect.

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  7. NankaOctober 12, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    That last line was an excellent twist and naughty!! :)

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  8. Jae RoseOctober 12, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    What a beautiful assault of the senses..I could smell..I could savour..warm..enticing..delicious..
    Jae

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  9. UnknownOctober 12, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Cinnamon! Coffee!
    So when is the novella coming out, Laurie?

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  10. Sheilagh LeeOctober 12, 2011 at 11:17 AM

    I love the way you wrote this bravo.

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  11. MaryOctober 12, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    The absolutely perfect ending! Love it, Laurie.

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  12. Linda H.October 12, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    So...let me see. If Morning Delight leads to (perhaps) "afternoon delight" then what does afternoon delight lead to?

    ;-)

    Just me being silly. Good one, Laurie.

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  13. AltonianOctober 12, 2011 at 1:51 PM

    Delightful piece, and a lot of my favourite flavours too!

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  14. Old EggOctober 12, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Not only did we get a delightful assault on the senses we were able to conjecture on the possible sexy outcome. A beautiful piece indeed.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 12, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    Charming, Laurie. My take is short and sweet as well this week.

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  16. andy sewinaOctober 12, 2011 at 6:13 PM

    WoW! sounds naughty!

    Wouldn't mind a bite of that apple strudel though!!

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  17. ShaunaOctober 12, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    oh I adore this poem, sweet and light like a good romantic comedy.

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  18. AvaOctober 12, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    I enjoyed it. Naughty ending! :) AN interesting poem. My offering: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2011/10/12/believe/

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  19. Isabel DoyleOctober 13, 2011 at 8:00 AM

    delightful Laurie

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  20. rchOctober 17, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    very yummy, nice take on the prompt.

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