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Monday, April 30, 2012

I'll Never Forget

I remember your exuberance
Exuberance, exuberance
I remember your smile
Your smile, smile
I remember your zest for life
Z-e-s-t- Go Life!
I remember your undying support
UNdying
I remember your last day
The last day
I remember
Yes, I re-mem-ber
You

©laurie kolp

Prompt inspiration: Day 30 NaPoWriMo- 3 I remember’s
PA- A fade away poem
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7 comments:

  1. Brian MillerApril 30, 2012 at 8:38 AM

    but the words seem to be fading fast...smiles....nice effect with the diminishing font laurie...

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  2. UnknownApril 30, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    Like the intensity of the first lines and the decline in subsequent lines. Sad, Laurie.

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  3. teriApril 30, 2012 at 3:44 PM

    You will always remember. Keep writing it out. Sending hugs.

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  4. kaykualaApril 30, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    A clever way of presentation. A graphic display of the lingering feel until it disappears. How nice. Great write Laurie!

    Hank

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  5. Buddah MoskowitzApril 30, 2012 at 7:59 PM

    Look at you, with all your fancy-schmancy font sizes! It would all be empty costuming were it not for the great poem. Well done. - Mosk

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  6. MaryApril 30, 2012 at 9:29 PM

    Very sad, Laurie. Poetry will maintain the memories.

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  7. SaravMay 2, 2012 at 7:44 AM

    Oh Laurie I love this. The phrasing, sizing, beautifully poignant.

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