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Friday, December 7, 2012

My Christmas List


Dear Santa,

Clothes might be nice,
Pots and pans to drum,
A remodeled kitchen,
For my iPod, tunes to hum.

But, really...

Enough space for all the poems
I'd like to write next year,
Health, abundance for us all,
A daily attitude of cheer.

Merry Christmas!

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Prompt inspiration: Imaginary Gardens- Words Count with Mama Zen- Christmas list
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23 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorDecember 7, 2012 at 9:00 AM

    This was well done in 50 words, with a rhyme scheme thrown in for good measure.

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  2. EllaDecember 7, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    Bravo!
    I need to re do mine...
    I will cause Toads to turn red...
    I love yours :D

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  3. Other MaryDecember 7, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!

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  4. Other MaryDecember 7, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    Very good Laurie! And a very Merry Christmas to you!

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  5. Amrit SinhaDecember 7, 2012 at 10:15 AM

    And we will be waiting to read all the poems :-)

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  6. Maude LynnDecember 7, 2012 at 11:08 AM

    Oh, absolutely! I love the rhymes.

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  7. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 7, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    You even managed a rhyme scheme in 50 words. Way to go! I'm looking forward to all those poems too! Merry Christmas, kiddo.

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  8. SusanDecember 7, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    Hurray! I imagine this on a Card for the season with a picture of you and your loved ones and a Bronx cheeer for Hallmark.

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  9. Brian MillerDecember 7, 2012 at 12:35 PM

    a daily attitude of cheer...that would not be a bad thing at all...smiles...def looking forward to those poems...have a great friday laurie

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  10. MargaretDecember 7, 2012 at 3:23 PM

    I raise my glass and say "cheers"

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  11. Kay L. DaviesDecember 7, 2012 at 3:45 PM

    Health and an attitude of cheer. Wonderful!
    You nailed it, Laurie.
    K

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  12. HannahDecember 7, 2012 at 3:48 PM

    Laurie! So well said... love what you'd like. :)

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  13. Jennifer WagnerDecember 7, 2012 at 5:54 PM

    Yep, yep...daily attitude of cheer...I'm adding that to my list.

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  14. PeggyDecember 7, 2012 at 6:59 PM

    So very well done! Thanks for the peaceful smile.

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  15. UnknownDecember 7, 2012 at 8:39 PM

    Cheer - a perfect gift! Now to find a box for it!

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  16. MaryDecember 7, 2012 at 9:10 PM

    Health is one of the most important things. And cheer is definitely a high priority as well!

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  17. Susie ClevengerDecember 7, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    A great list...Merry Christmas!

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  18. UnknownDecember 7, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    Merry Christmas, and keep those poems coming!

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  19. online bus ticketDecember 7, 2012 at 9:54 PM

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  20. J Cosmo NewberyDecember 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Hope you get them Laurie!

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  21. Dave KingDecember 8, 2012 at 5:21 AM

    Like this very much indeed. Says all that's needed.
    Have a great one!

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  22. MarianDecember 8, 2012 at 4:40 PM

    space? to be creative? hope that's not too much to ask! ;)

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  23. AnonymousDecember 9, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    What a great list! I kind of think all your poems are gifts to the rest of us.

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