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Wednesday, January 16, 2013

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Measure me luscious,
                                    not dismal;
                                                        the longer, the better
                                                                                           no waffling, just lots of butter please.


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Poem inspirations:
3WW- dismal, luscious, waffle
Poetic Asides- A "measured" poem
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17 comments:

  1. Brian MillerJanuary 16, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    hahahaha you dont want to know where this poem took me....just saying....oh my....lol....

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  2. anthonynorthJanuary 16, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    Cheeky but tasty. Nice one :-)

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  3. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 16, 2013 at 11:37 AM

    Deliciously naughty.

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  4. Jae RoseJanuary 16, 2013 at 11:54 AM

    Mm measure me luscious..what a satisfying thought on a chilly evening..fine words..

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  5. Amrit SinhaJanuary 16, 2013 at 12:18 PM

    Wow ... this tastes good ;-)

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  6. Stan SkiJanuary 16, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    Naughty... but nice...!

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  7. JazzbumpaJanuary 16, 2013 at 12:45 PM

    I think I know where this took Brian.
    At least I think I saw him there

    Yum!
    And I don't think you need the please at the end.


    Cheers!
    JzB

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  8. UnknownJanuary 16, 2013 at 2:53 PM

    Brevity becomes you!

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  9. Anna :o]January 16, 2013 at 7:04 PM

    Naughty - but nice!

    Anna :o]

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  10. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 16, 2013 at 8:19 PM

    I like how you string out those lines, sort of like spreading butter on...something...

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  11. Susie ClevengerJanuary 16, 2013 at 11:19 PM

    Whew! Now that says a lot with such few words! Thanks for buying my book!! Hope you like it!

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  12. Old EggJanuary 17, 2013 at 12:56 AM

    You certainly took your readers on a tempting ride today.

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  13. AltonianJanuary 17, 2013 at 11:27 AM

    That's a very sexy piece about a bread-stick - isn't it??

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  14. LLM CallingJanuary 17, 2013 at 12:02 PM

    oh how naughty :)

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  15. ninotazizJanuary 19, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    Hhmmm...

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  16. J Cosmo NewberyJanuary 19, 2013 at 5:00 PM

    Laurie! Butter? Who would have thought!

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  17. gabrielleJanuary 21, 2013 at 11:41 PM

    Julia would approve...

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