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Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Nonsense


Photo by L. Kolp


Do you see the pattern?
Doused with sprouts
of swirly fluff
~naughty words~
I've had enough!
They don't make sense,
no tense (some dense).
Overused, a pale
defense against
ShAtTeReD poems,
prolific forms
from whence; do you
get my drift?
 
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Prompt inspirations:
3WW~ douse, naughty, pale
Poets United Verse First: Patterns
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29 comments:

  1. Sheilagh LeeFebruary 27, 2013 at 8:44 AM

    well done Laurie

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  2. alan1704February 27, 2013 at 8:46 AM

    Arghh, for some who is colour blind your picture sent me cross-eyed. The poem is brilliant. A great combination.

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  3. Optimistic ExistentialistFebruary 27, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    I love how the poem and the picture work os perfectly together. Great work as always Laurie :)

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  4. Brian MillerFebruary 27, 2013 at 10:25 AM

    ha. your words are a swirl unto themselves....kinda like how form feels to me at times...smiles....

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  5. MaryFebruary 27, 2013 at 10:29 AM

    Ha, I especially like the swirly fluff covering the naughty words. Nice illogical logic here. Smiles.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    i get your drift! this made me smile, loved it and all 3 prompts into it? well done!!!

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  7. UnknownFebruary 27, 2013 at 10:53 AM

    Your form is fun to read... I tried it aloud really fast and rather slow. The effects were surprisingly different. And I totally agree with the foul language sentiment. Sometimes it's the only way to really convey. More often than not, an easy shock effect.

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  8. Amrit SinhaFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:13 AM

    This is fun ... loved it !!!

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  9. GailFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    Yes, it makes sense to me. Well done.

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  10. Buddah MoskowitzFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:17 AM

    Loved this art project (the photo and the poem make this a project).

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  11. PeggyFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:30 AM

    Love your idea of the swirl of words and also I like the photo. I am wondering where it was taken.

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  12. Jae RoseFebruary 27, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    The best sense often comes out of non sense..

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  13. CVFebruary 27, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    "of swirly fluff
    ~naughty words~
    I've had enough!"
    I like this.

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  14. HelenFebruary 27, 2013 at 2:46 PM

    Great poem ... what a challenge combining three prompts! :)

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  15. UnknownFebruary 27, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    There's definitely a connection between the poem and the photo! Nice!

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  16. Old EggFebruary 27, 2013 at 4:16 PM

    The illustration was quite a test (yes, another color blind fool). I thought I would read it backwards as well and it was just as much fun. Then even better was to read every second line and then return back again. You played with us so I got hooked and became inventive.

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2013 at 5:35 PM

    awww I really enjoyed this :)

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  18. rchFebruary 27, 2013 at 5:52 PM

    Such fun with words, extremely clever and enjoyable.

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2013 at 6:03 PM

    wow. laurie - good deal. serious with a lryical swirl, with a hint of satire.

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  20. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 27, 2013 at 7:56 PM

    The photo is intriguing.....love "shattered poems, prolific forms". Right now I havent a word or a form to my name. Just sooooo tiiiiiired!

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  21. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 28, 2013 at 3:54 AM

    A fun piece. I enjoyed the rhymes. )

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  22. Dave KingFebruary 28, 2013 at 7:01 AM

    Yup, loud and clear Laurie! Me like.

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  23. Andy SewinaFebruary 28, 2013 at 6:16 PM

    Wonderful words!

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  24. ayalaFebruary 28, 2013 at 7:02 PM

    Love this, Laurie!

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  25. AnonymousMarch 1, 2013 at 4:56 PM

    Nice play of words

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  26. Myrna R.March 1, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    Ha. I'm smiling 'cause I have such trouble with form. Well, not trouble really, I'm just too lazy to try any fluffy form. Your poem - not fluffy at all, just fun. Thanks Laurie.

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  27. SaravMarch 2, 2013 at 1:46 PM

    Definitely get your drift :-) You had patterns in the photo and your words. Wonderful

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  28. artbyraeMarch 2, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    great work love the photo

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  29. Bethe77March 3, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    Poem and photo hand in hand. Perfectly fitted to one another.
    Blessings

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