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truly delightful!wonderful write!
Very cool! Or should I say hot?
smiles. this has a fun cadence to it...we have stayed at the pool this week and after day 1 invested in better sun screen...
nice - i like the rhythm you build up with your words...cool pool fool...lovely..
Reminds me of the old Nat King Cole song: "Roll out those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer..."
Enjoyed the flow of this a lot. It felt like a warm summer day.
Can I jump inside your poem? It sounds like a good place to be.
You are so kool, Laurie. I so love your voice! It was like reading sunshine.
good work. :) hope you had as much fun writing this one as I did reading it :)bummy / monty
super fun and cute.
Wonderful, those lines are all I have the breath for at the moment - and all that is needed: they get the job done admirably.
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truly delightful!
ReplyDeletewonderful write!
Very cool! Or should I say hot?
ReplyDeletesmiles. this has a fun cadence to it...we have stayed at the pool this week and after day 1 invested in better sun screen...
ReplyDeletenice - i like the rhythm you build up with your words...cool pool fool...lovely..
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the old Nat King Cole song: "Roll out those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer..."
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the flow of this a lot. It felt like a warm summer day.
ReplyDeleteCan I jump inside your poem? It sounds like a good place to be.
ReplyDeleteYou are so kool, Laurie. I so love your voice! It was like reading sunshine.
ReplyDeletegood work. :) hope you had as much fun writing this one as I did reading it :)
ReplyDeletebummy / monty
super fun and cute.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, those lines are all I have the breath for at the moment - and all that is needed: they get the job done admirably.
ReplyDelete