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Yes, Laurie, that really is GOOD reason to let it go!
nice....cool idea on finding a poem within the lyrics...the fractals of the mind in particular...oy, mine can only handle so many pieces...
I agree. a very good reason to let it go! very nice!
YES....the fears do crystallize...you should allow them to melt and let go!
Best to let it go Laurie ~ I love this song by the way ~
nice work. Short but not short on meaning.
no other alternative...we have to let it go...i shudder when fears crystallize...
I so resonate with the fractals in the mind and the weight of them.......right where I'm at right now. This message hits home.
powerful and emotional, the hold of fear, the joy of letting go.
Excellent letting it go setting and distillation.
Fear is certainly the hardest thing to let go, yet it is the one I'd say we should definitely get rid of.
Well done indeed..thanks for sharing this
oh yes, when fears crystallize in our mind it is immobilizing. well said Laurie.
excellent Laurie! Thanks!
I'm always pleasantly surprised when poets create something quite special with just a few words!
Very powerful, well chosen words - the image created packing a strong, thought provoking message.
I love this business of making something from something else. That's what art is, I reckon.
Found poems are fun.Fears... so hard to let go of...but how freeing when done.
Laurie, nicely done! Fears do freeze us. Fractals is such a wonderful word too :-)
Well done. Laurie! This was epigrammatic and trenchant.
"fears crystalize" - just gorgeous. This conjures up so much for me. Thank you for sharing. http://laurieandher20somethingpoetry.wordpress.com
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Yes, Laurie, that really is GOOD reason to let it go!
nice....cool idea on finding a poem within the lyrics...the fractals of the mind in particular...oy, mine can only handle so many pieces...
I agree. a very good reason to let it go! very nice!
YES....the fears do crystallize...you should allow them to melt and let go!
Best to let it go Laurie ~ I love this song by the way ~
nice work. Short but not short on meaning.
no other alternative...we have to let it go...i shudder when fears crystallize...
I so resonate with the fractals in the mind and the weight of them.......right where I'm at right now. This message hits home.
powerful and emotional, the hold of fear, the joy of letting go.
Excellent letting it go setting and distillation.
Fear is certainly the hardest thing to let go, yet it is the one I'd say we should definitely get rid of.
Well done indeed..thanks for sharing this
oh yes, when fears crystallize in our mind it is immobilizing. well said Laurie.
excellent Laurie! Thanks!
I'm always pleasantly surprised when poets create something quite special with just a few words!
Very powerful, well chosen words - the image created packing a strong, thought provoking message.
I love this business of making something from something else. That's what art is, I reckon.
Found poems are fun.
Fears... so hard to let go of...but how freeing when done.
Laurie, nicely done! Fears do freeze us. Fractals is such a wonderful word too :-)
Well done. Laurie! This was epigrammatic and trenchant.
"fears crystalize" - just gorgeous. This conjures up so much for me. Thank you for sharing.
http://laurieandher20somethingpoetry.wordpress.com
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