Sunday, May 4, 2014

Debauchee

Chair With the Wings of a Vulture, 1960, Salvador Dali 




wayward one
spoon-fed by candlelight,
yet unfulfilled~
I pray for you


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 *Inspiration~The Mag218*

19 comments:

Magaly Guerrero said...

"...spoon-fed by candlelight," but left empty-bellied. So many tools for feeding, but no food.

Deep.

My Magpie Entry

awakenedwords said...

excellent

Brian Miller said...

def those that can find no contentment---need our prayers....

Jinksy said...

Your words make so much more sense than Dali!

Kathe W. said...

nice interpretation of Dalis work!

ccchampagne said...

Concise and to the point. Simply perfect as far as I'm concerned!

Björn said...

spoon-fed on candle-light.. I like that a lot..

humbird said...

Sharp!

Wendy Bourke said...

Lovely. I’m sure this piece, will resonate with many who pray for a lost beloved.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

"spoon fed by candlelight" is wonderful!

Truedessa said...

A contemplative poem..

purplepeninportland said...

"spoon fed by candlelight"- Lovely, Laurie.

Sumana Roy said...

a deep prayer for the wayward one...
beautiful laurie...

Karen S. said...

Oh yes, and they shall be blessed!

Helena said...

There is hope when one's truly blessed!

undercaws.com said...

I see the spoons reflected in "yet unfulfilled," and think it's genius. Brava!

Belva Rae Staples said...

You've jammed in the essence of it in a few well crafted lines!

Carrie Van Horn said...

Contentment is vital...a brilliant write Laurie!

Tess Kincaid said...

Love the spoon fed thing...nice Laurie...