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| Chair With the Wings of a Vulture, 1960, Salvador Dali |
wayward one
spoon-fed by candlelight,
yet unfulfilled~
I pray for you
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*Inspiration~The Mag218*
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| Chair With the Wings of a Vulture, 1960, Salvador Dali |
18 comments:
"...spoon-fed by candlelight," but left empty-bellied. So many tools for feeding, but no food.
Deep.
My Magpie Entry
def those that can find no contentment---need our prayers....
Your words make so much more sense than Dali!
nice interpretation of Dalis work!
Concise and to the point. Simply perfect as far as I'm concerned!
spoon-fed on candle-light.. I like that a lot..
Sharp!
Lovely. I’m sure this piece, will resonate with many who pray for a lost beloved.
"spoon fed by candlelight" is wonderful!
A contemplative poem..
"spoon fed by candlelight"- Lovely, Laurie.
a deep prayer for the wayward one...
beautiful laurie...
Oh yes, and they shall be blessed!
There is hope when one's truly blessed!
I see the spoons reflected in "yet unfulfilled," and think it's genius. Brava!
You've jammed in the essence of it in a few well crafted lines!
Contentment is vital...a brilliant write Laurie!
Love the spoon fed thing...nice Laurie...
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