HA, HA, HA.. Ha, ha.......Very smart!
Suddenly I see a whole holiday parade marching by with horses leading the way!
I knew a girl who had a ponytail that looked like a horse's tail!! LOL. have a great day
Simple, yet effective.
Brief words that bring out the image perfectly.
Memorializing memorials - (for tomorrow). Well done.
having just driven by the horse farm, those tails were going....smiles.
Ah yes, my thoughts exactly! This is great!
brilliant! - i thought of horses too :)
Yes indeed!! Loved this Laurie!
simple and effective gets me thinking what comes next after the tail is raised ;-)
I too envision a parade of soldiers being honored for their bravery as emotions take over!
Good tight write. And congrats on your contract! I saw it on fb.
Chuckles! It suddenly comes alive. Nicely Laurie!Hank
Simply put but so effective at stirring the emotions and showing the image. You've done a lot in few words.
It works beautifully with the image..well doneHugsSueAnn
Ha, snappy and surprising. Great.
Oh! Your poem immediately made me remember Kennedy's funeral cortege.This is stunning in it's simplicity.
Simplicity is wonderful!!
unexpected image/symbol here. well done.
Oh well done!Anna :o]
I love this simple image you've created! Yes!
Simple and swishy-sweet!
A clear picture. So much, painted with a remarkable economy of words.
simplicity in an excellent way..
Oh wow clever I like!
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