Sunday, May 26, 2013

The Mag 170

Ponytail by Last Exit
Pic prompt courtesy of The Mag 170
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Flag Day--
the horse's tail
stirs the air
 
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31 comments:

L said...

HA, HA, HA.. Ha, ha.......

Very smart!

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Suddenly I see a whole holiday parade marching by with horses leading the way!

Laurel's Quill said...

I knew a girl who had a ponytail that looked like a horse's tail!! LOL. have a great day

Helen said...

Splendid .....

Charleen said...

Simple, yet effective.

Susan said...

Nice, sensual.

anthonynorth said...

Brief words that bring out the image perfectly.

Berowne said...

Memorializing memorials - (for tomorrow). Well done.

Brian Miller said...

having just driven by the horse farm, those tails were going....smiles.

Karen S. said...

Ah yes, my thoughts exactly! This is great!

Karen S. said...

Ah yes, my thoughts exactly! This is great!

turtlememoir said...

brilliant! - i thought of horses too :)

Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Yes indeed!! Loved this Laurie!

uneven steven said...

simple and effective gets me thinking what comes next after the tail is raised ;-)

Dana Dampier said...

I too envision a parade of soldiers being honored for their bravery as emotions take over!

Other Mary said...

Good tight write. And congrats on your contract! I saw it on fb.

kaykuala said...

Chuckles! It suddenly comes alive. Nicely Laurie!

Hank

Carol Steel said...

Simply put but so effective at stirring the emotions and showing the image. You've done a lot in few words.

mindlovemisery said...

Lovely =)

SueAnn Lommler said...

It works beautifully with the image..well done
Hugs
SueAnn

Dave King said...

Ha, snappy and surprising. Great.

Kathe W. said...

Oh! Your poem immediately made me remember Kennedy's funeral cortege.
This is stunning in it's simplicity.

Lyn said...

Simplicity is wonderful!!

LaTonya Baldwin said...

unexpected image/symbol here. well done.

hyperCRYPTICal said...

Oh well done!

Anna :o]

Susan Lindquist said...

I love this simple image you've created! Yes!

Helena said...

Simple and swishy-sweet!

J Cosmo Newbery said...

A clear picture. So much, painted with a remarkable economy of words.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

A clear picture. So much, painted with a remarkable economy of words.

Truedessa said...

simplicity in an excellent way..

Tess Kincaid said...

Oh wow clever I like!