Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Copious Flow

Sunrise behind rock buttes in southwestern US. Photo by Peggy Goetz











Resurrected:
a phantom inside of me
longing for flexibility,
 
agile mind, body, spirit.
 
A tangible difference
felt in ten weeks-
acuity and energy.
 
Flaccid?
Poetic fluidity,
my everlasting rock.
 
 
 
~~
 
Poetic inspiration:
3WW- agile, flaccid, phantom
PUVerseFirst- (short & sweet)

28 comments:

Brian Miller said...

makes all the difference to get that energy flowing eh? good on you for sticking with it...and it seems to help the poetic muscle as well...smiles.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

Once you've started to see and feel the difference a good habit makes, it's hard to go back to old ways.

artbyrae said...

When you have energy and feel good everything rocks!

Sheilagh Lee said...

It's nice to have energy.

maryajensenwrites said...

Nice addition to you body of work, both personally and poetically.

Lisa A. Williams said...

Nothing like the feel of a new surge of energy, feeding both mind and body. Lovely write!

Bethe77 said...

Great use of the words and such a journey is worth the energy. Blessings

Helen said...

Oh yes, it's worth every little ache and pain, the time .. all of it! I calculated how many miles I walk (fast) in one month and it comes to almost fifty! Two to three miles at a time doesn't seem that far. Keep at it, your heart and mind thank you.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

I especially love your closing lines. Thank Goddess for poetry!

Peggy said...

Nice Lauire! I like that you used my picture--and sunrise is indeed a resurrection of sorts. Yeah for the Goddess of Poetry! Thanks for your continued support here.

Poet Laundry said...

Yes, poetry is like a solid rock to rely on.

ssmatthews451 said...

It is good to get those poetic juices flowin'!

oldegg said...

Looks like success on all fronts. Well done.

LaTonya Baldwin said...

Trust, the body is less tolerant of abuse and neglect with age. Keep moving so it remains natural. Ack, sorry to preach. Love what you do, Laurie.

Robyn Greenhouse said...

It's nice to have some inspiration by your side!

kaykuala said...

No more listless and directions defined. Those spurts of energy to thank for! Nicely Laurie!

Hank

alan1704 said...

New energy and new life, very nice

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Well done!

Akila G said...

Wonderful! the close is a relief! :)

J Cosmo Newbery said...

And an excellent rock it is too.

Paige Nicole said...

gorgeous laurie. well-done, and I can relate.

Optimistic Existentialist said...

Quite lovely Laurie :-)

Loredana Donovan said...

Walking is the best exercise ... glad to hear this is giving you energy and poetic creativity :)

Mary Ann Potter said...

A lovely write, Laurie --- introspective and just right. I like the way you get to the point here. May the flexibility you seek come just a little easier!

himani rawat nayal said...

very well written...agile mind i see

Sam Edge said...

flacid? poetic fluidity... nice ine

Kathe W. said...

good work on your part!!
and excellent poem!

SaraV said...

So nice to have all these wonderful people to inspire us with prompts and poems. Love your fluidity :-)