State of Fate
Fate--
a ripple effect
choices made
serendipity
lemonade
highways travelled
detours taken
battles fought
morals shaken
fences mended
words unspoken
faith shattered
vows broken
loving life
ignoring hate
accepting, forgiving--
the state of fate.
@laurie kolp
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11 comments:
In other words fate's in a muddle. Good take on the prompt.
You crack me up, Viv... thanks.
Excellent take.
Anna :o]
Love the last stanza, Laurie.
Nicely done to prompt Laurie. I too, love the last stanza.
Pamela
fluent word flow.
Perfectly described. Enjoyed that.
Love the poem, the first verse is a stroke of genius!
Excellent. I am not a superstitious person, don't know what to make of fate.
That's a really good take on that prompt.
Accomplished and compelling. Excellently done.
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