Saturday, May 28, 2011

Serene Symphony

Image by Michael Maier, German surrealist
Joy
Oneness
Melodic dreams
Heaven's serene symphony
Wash ashore these troubled times
Let mind, body, spirit unearth your fear
Hypnotic wings in harmony sing 
Fly on high transparency
Transform
You, me
One

@laurie kolp

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{Prompt inspiration and image: Writer's Island}

13 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

Love the shape of this poem! It's like it has wings!

anthonynorth said...

A great sense of the mystical in this. Lovely.

vivinfrance said...

Pretty on the page, and pretty good poetry!

Elizabeth said...

Uplifting words. Thank you,

Elizabeth

imnotaverse said...

I like the shape of this; is it a particular form?

Laurie Kolp said...

Thank you... no particular form (that I'm aware of) it just came out that way.

Wayne Pitchko said...

I like the way it came out Laurie...thanks for sharing

Dave King said...

The final three lines clinch it for me.

Mary said...

Beautiful words, beautiful arrangement of them.

jabblog said...

This flows beautifully.

Jingle said...

well done.
love the prompt image.

gsb3 said...

Enjoyed this one. Very ethereal, but realistic as well. And positive. Leaves you with a very good feeling about life and the universe. Thanks for posting.

Short Poems said...

Simply beautiful!
Shape Poems