Wednesday, May 18, 2011

3 Word Wednesday

Psyche, You’re It

Incensed nonsense,
insane thoughts s - k - i - d
like a child’s muddy shoes--
dampened recesses
of a troubled mind.

@laurie kolp
 
3WW: skid, incensed, damp

13 comments:

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the child simile! Adds a kind of wild abandon! Great little poem!

anthonynorth said...

Love the way you describe the troubled mind here.

jaerose said...

I felt much complexity here..children's rhymes..but oh-so grown up feelings..Jae

Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Within said...

love that you can still feel like a child.

Jessica Prescott said...

the title is quite fun, goes well

Nara Malone said...

I like the idea of thoughts skidding like a child's muddy shoes, could see that image. Great take on the prompt.

Laurie Kolp said...

Thanks for your kind comments!

trisha said...

short, beautiful and vividly descriptive.

loved it. :)

trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/incensed-for-3ww/

tarunima said...

so much can be said in a few words!:)
loved it:)

honeyhaiku said...

Well penned, Laurie. Light and thoughtful.

rmpWritings said...

simple and yet it holds so much. being filled with skidding insane thoughts, I can relate.

mindlovemisery said...

Really good job I love how you used the words

beespoetry said...

Light in style, deep in content! Love it.