Love the child simile! Adds a kind of wild abandon! Great little poem!
Love the way you describe the troubled mind here.
I felt much complexity here..children's rhymes..but oh-so grown up feelings..Jae
love that you can still feel like a child.
the title is quite fun, goes well
I like the idea of thoughts skidding like a child's muddy shoes, could see that image. Great take on the prompt.
Thanks for your kind comments!
short, beautiful and vividly descriptive.loved it. :)trishahttp://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/05/19/incensed-for-3ww/
so much can be said in a few words!:)loved it:)
Well penned, Laurie. Light and thoughtful.
simple and yet it holds so much. being filled with skidding insane thoughts, I can relate.
Really good job I love how you used the words
Light in style, deep in content! Love it.
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